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- Fri Jul 22, 2011 2:01 pm
- Forum: User-Fiction Reviews
- Topic: Author Feedback: Voyager
- Replies: 14
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- Fri Jul 22, 2011 7:57 am
- Forum: User-Fiction Reviews
- Topic: Author Feedback: Voyager
- Replies: 14
- Views: 8076
Yes Steve, it is your fault. :razz: LadyTevar, I'm a new writer; can you expound on what you mean by "meat", so that I know what you're looking for? I know the scene comes off as them having an argument (And Zillyah is going to have a moment of gut-clenching terror when her mind catches up to what s...