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I have been convinced to post such a thread. Though how I managed to miss a private message for an entire week escapes me...

So, my fiction, by order of update (most recent at the top, etc.)

The Unknown Travels

Reilly the Crazy Sniper sets off on a mission to do... what? We may never know... because I sure don't.

FLOAT

Set in 2020, a group of three bored guys on the moon realize they may have to spring into action as the heroes to save an ancient and powerful treasure from use. Unfortunately, it seems something's happened to the formatting. I'm trying to work on Chapter Four sporadically, but it's been three months... fics have come back after periods longer than that.

Alliances, Arcturans, and Apples

A mostly abandoned project, originally the first attempt to write something resembling a novel. Lee Hawkes attempts to travel to Earth, devastated thirty years ago by the Arcturan Consortium, and discover the truth when the Arcturans attack again...

Red Light

I wrote this for English class, directed to write something "spooky", and had no ideas until Ra, on Narsil's long-defunct forums, posted a picture of the Karos graveyard, and suddenly I was inspired!.

That's all, folks. For now. For now...
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Update: The ASP Tale begins. Characters from all over are slowly brought together in a strange world, or set of worlds... and who will decide their fates?
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Dakarne: it's London.

Thank god for Tennessee Harold Ford protecting us from nuclear vegemite. - Petrosjko
Major Reilly: Air Command
"They can shoot me dead, but the moral high ground is mine" - The Doctor
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Very interesting start to it... but so much is missing from where we're brought into the middle of things.
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Updated The ASP Tale. Graham McCoy tries to do something more than just watch as his city is brought to its knees before him.
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and I still have NO Clue what's going on :shock:
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Good. You shouldn't, not yet, at least.
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Ah. well.. In that case... carry on!
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