Feedback: Elheru

[The Village Idiot]

Heretic's Redemption (chapter 2 added) - Feed back

I have to say I am very impressed with the way this story was written. Like all of your other stories I have read. The imagery was beautiful, the story was enthralling, and I am very interested in it. I do like the addition to the Dreadnaught to the story line, very different perspective and very interesting to see how he is put into battle....and his muster tested against the deamons, all things considering.

I am also enjoying the hell out of Maladar's story as well as In Memoria. Your 40k stories are very execlent.

Hope this helps, and doesnt end up sounding like alot of ass kissing.

Split by me- CC