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Lord Iames Osari
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#1 Author Feedback: Lord Iames
Bring it on.
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#2 Re: Author Feedback: Lord Iames
Be careful what you wish for... I'm the TypoNazi. Just ask CynCat. ;)Lord Iames Osari wrote:Bring it on.
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I am confident in my innate spelling abilities. 
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Hmm.
So, it's been a few months, with no comments of any sort.
Why?
Did I put too much up at once?
Is it too bad? Too mediocre? Too boring? Not appealing to the tastes of the forumgoers?
I'm trying to figure it out.
So, it's been a few months, with no comments of any sort.
Why?
Did I put too much up at once?
Is it too bad? Too mediocre? Too boring? Not appealing to the tastes of the forumgoers?
I'm trying to figure it out.
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In all honesty I didn't read it. Not a gundam fan.
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Well, to be honest myself, the earlier parts need to be revamped quite a bit, but I haven't had the time, what with college and all.
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