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Narsil · Post by **Narsil** » Thu Aug 10, 2006 7:14 am

LadyTevar wrote:It just didn't feel like any of the Doctors, tho... I don't know how to explain it, Narsil.

Very well: I'll try moving it back a Doctor (the current one, as played by David Tennant) and fixing a great amount of the dialogue, redoing the scene from scratch and making sure I get it right this time - not that I've got much to go on with what I did wrong, but it's worth a shot.

Narsil · Post by **Narsil** » Sun Jun 03, 2007 6:16 am

Hello people.

Just to remind you all; I do still exist, and I'm not here to simply post a fiction I've been working with a friend on just to have the effect of... well... pissing in the wind.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sun Jun 03, 2007 5:34 pm

I've not had time to read it, Narsil, but I will say this much:

KEEP POSTING.
Please

Narsil · Post by **Narsil** » Sun Jun 03, 2007 5:39 pm

As I said earlier. I'm posting it at a one comment/one post basis. You've posted at least one comment, I hope you enjoy Chapter Four

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sun Jun 03, 2007 6:11 pm

You're drawing a lot of people in together, it seems. I'm getting very interested in the story. Please continue to Chapter 14?

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sun Jun 03, 2007 7:00 pm

Feedback.

Now post more, dammit

Narsil · Post by **Narsil** » Sun Jun 03, 2007 7:17 pm

And with Chapter Six... I'm going to bed. I might post more tomorrow, but I'm going to be busy with college. Good evening and see you all soon enough.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 3:53 pm

I'm still wondering about Janus and his wife. Something's off with them. KEEP POSTING!

Narsil · Post by **Narsil** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 3:59 pm

LadyTevar wrote:I'm still wondering about Janus and his wife. Something's off with them.

And I'm not telling what; it's already written partially to its eventual and ultimate conclusion at any rate.

KEEP POSTING!

As you wish, Lady Tevar; Chapter Eight posted.

EDIT: Eight, damnit, eight... not seven. Bloody typo.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 4:02 pm

Go ahead and post 9 and 10, ya silly wanker. Can't you tell I'm enjoying the story?

Narsil · Post by **Narsil** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 4:08 pm

Ninth, Tenth and Eleventh Chapters posted.

But I'm wondering if there's a bit of BBCode for centre-aligning some bits of one or two of the later chapters.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 4:31 pm

.... Janus and his wife are the two drow.

One silver-white eye gleamed brightly in the darkness, with his other having been replaced by a silver coloured plate studded with a series of red jewels arranged like the eyes of a spider.

Stealing ideas from Cyncat?

Narsil · Post by **Narsil** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 4:39 pm

LadyTevar wrote:.... Janus and his wife are the two drow.

Aye; you'd be surprised how many people didn't figure that out before it was stated outright.

Stealing ideas from Cyncat?

City of the Spider Queen, actually. Which is where Trizkel retrieved the item if-I-remember-correctly.

Though I will readily admit that Cynical Cat's fic did make me originally aware of the artefact prior to my encountering CotS - and it was such a brilliant artefact that I really couldn't resist.

Narsil · Post by **Narsil** » Tue Jun 05, 2007 4:46 pm

Oh, and I've posted Chapter Twelve

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon Jun 11, 2007 10:46 am

Narsil? I love the new Doctor. Sharp, witty, and very self-assured, even in the body of a woman.

Amusing to have him/her assume the name "SarahJane"

Narsil · Post by **Narsil** » Mon Jun 11, 2007 11:19 am

LadyTevar wrote:Narsil? I love the new Doctor. Sharp, witty, and very self-assured, even in the body of a woman.

Thanks. I'm glad you like her.

I've always liked the idea of having a woman play the Doctor, and since I'm certain that Revan should be a woman... Revan/Doctor is herself a woman.

Though there are some differences to the Revan story; she remembers most of her previous lives, except for the moments where she went dark side.

Amusing to have him/her assume the name "SarahJane"

I was originally going to have simply 'Jane Smith' (a feminisation of the Doctor's favourite 'John Smith'), but I figured that since s/he's already used an old companion's name before, I might as well add the 'Sarah-' part.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue Jun 12, 2007 4:13 pm

I don't know what's funnier... the little tidbits like â€˜The shopâ€™s called â€œNaughty Kath Houndâ€

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue Jun 12, 2007 5:27 pm

So why haven't they had sex yet, Narsil?

Narsil · Post by **Narsil** » Wed Jun 13, 2007 1:31 am

LadyTevar wrote:So why haven't they had sex yet, Narsil?

They've been going out for about five to six days after admitting their feelings to one another after four and a half years, so it's going to be a rather slow moving relationship. And since Dynamene's had some bad experiences involving sex during her youth, she's actively putting it off. Fortunately for her, Taurrandir has a seemingly infinite well of patience; he must be psionically projecting all of his sexual frustration onto random people surrounding him or something like that.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:52 am

Again, great job with the TimeLord/Jedi! I'm wanting to see more.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sat Jun 23, 2007 1:23 pm

Cute little one-shot, Narsil :)

Narsil · Post by **Narsil** » Wed Jul 04, 2007 9:28 am

I regret to say that - due to irreconcilable differences in the ideas of me and my co-author, and several future plot problems that are doing nothing but causing us to get writer's block - Word of Angels has been discontinued. I don't see any possible ability to continue it in the near future, I'm afraid to say.

I'll miss writing on it, but we can't write something that has so many fundamental flaws that aren't really leading up to a proper ending.

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