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When Gix does tell the story, it better be in chapter, and not just a passing reference. I want to know what he did.
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Neither Nal or Triz would get Ten Thousand Broken Dreams to shatter. A certain violet eyed, twin scimitar wielding fanboy wet dream on the other hand . . . .

I've given a number of clues to what Gix has done, but it will be revealed in full in the near future.
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***WINCE****

Oh please tell me the fanboy wetdream did NOT get a hold of the Shattering Swords. Please tell me that it didn't go there.
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LadyTevar wrote:***WINCE****

Oh please tell me the fanboy wetdream did NOT get a hold of the Shattering Swords. Please tell me that it didn't go there.
As far as I know it is safely out of his grasp.
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Thank God.

I used to like him, thought it was a great series of novels ... for the first 6 books.
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Wow... nasty. The Cheleman have the ST equivalent of an EMP, it seems.

But the Federation Starship... is it really there, or a Cheleman trick?
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What did the Cheleman do ... send the Klingons 85-90 years into the future?
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All that work and the bloody god-weapon just summons the fucking demon into the world like it's easy.

Fuuuuuucccccckkk. We are so boned.
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frigidmagi wrote:All that work and the bloody god-weapon just summons the fucking demon into the world like it's easy.

Fuuuuuucccccckkk. We are so boned.
Remember Nalifan can open gates to and from the world. Its not easy, but it doesn't require god-like power to do. The abomination used the blood and souls of an entire village to open the gate.
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Once again, I *love* the commentary by Kaeryn. :lol:

But that god-weapon is serious trouble. He's got 7 beings he can seperate into? And the psilords were dumb enough to leave LOOPHOLES in his orders? :shock:
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Oh.. Kai the Klingon!

Which ship did they take? I don't recognize the description of a black & gray uniform... or are you going with something I've heard suggested before and used in novels where Klingon are unable to see red, but can see in the ultraviolet?
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LadyTevar wrote:Oh.. Kai the Klingon!

I don't recognize the description of a black & gray uniform... or are you going with something I've heard suggested before and used in novels where Klingon are unable to see red, but can see in the ultraviolet?
No, that was silly not having them able to see red when they have that huge frigging red arm on the trefoil.

The black uniform with the grey shoulderboards and coloured underlinging peaking out under the collars from latter DS9 and the TNG movies.

These suckers

And on the other, he doesn't seperate in 7 bodies, its a group conciousness. Very nasty. And yes the overmasters very powerful, but are also sloppy and inexperienced.
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Aha... so that's how you find a 'good woman' for a alien psyker. Very neatly done, my friend. Since he did not sense it, I'm amusing she is not a psyker herself?
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LadyTevar wrote:Aha... so that's how you find a 'good woman' for a alien psyker. Very neatly done, my friend. Since he did not sense it, I'm amusing she is not a psyker herself?
She would have been sent to the Eyes of Fire if she was.
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Gix is losing his allies.

I wonder who paid for the strike.
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So... the diversion point is Khaless.

Great job, my friend... although I do miss Nalifan and Co.
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YAY!!! More Whirlwind!

So, is the grandfather going to die, or will the 'evil daerhow' save him?
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ST AU:

Found a small typo, m'dear.
"Irrelevant. Their lives still have value. The needs of the many outway the needs of the few."
'Outweigh' is the one you were looking for.
'less fun than torturing a Vulcan'
*DIES LAUGHING* That is just too damn funny.
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Very damn true however.
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LadyTevar wrote:ST AU:

'less fun than torturing a Vulcan'
*DIES LAUGHING* That is just too damn funny.
That's from Ford originally. The investigation of the Federation/Klingon brawl in The Final Reflection is fucking hilarious.
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I don't think I ever read The Final Reflection. I may have to try to find it.
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French Toast?!?
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Yeah... the big bad Klingon eats something similar to French Toast, while his Science Officer drinks coffee. *giggles*
'Rith smiled. "Drink coffee and you'll actually enjoy Marine emergency rations. It'll make you the toughest Klingon in known space."

Makes me wonder what Chocolate would do to them, if Coffee's such a big thing.

And did she think to raid the Feddie-ship for their supply? :twisted:
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Wow... quite the long passage from Kaeryn, and on such an interesting topic as well.

But what I want to know is how Nalifan can manage to hold the upper hand in a conversation when he is that obviously wounded. *shakes head* One day, he's going to find someone who sees thru his confident bullshit.
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To be fair the fact that his buddy is right there helps. Meanwhile my boy has a passle of ex-slaves to defend all on his own against the manics who been taking out entire cities it seems.

Damn right he's gonna play it cool until his exposed assets are in safety. Then we can play piss contest if we got to.
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