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#401 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
*APPLAUDS*
There was no other way to do it, and you made it work perfectly.
There was no other way to do it, and you made it work perfectly.
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*APPLAUDS, Standing Ovation*
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#403 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
It always pissed me off that Leandra Hawke died, and there was no way to stop it. Just like the no-choice of losing the sister. At least if you took her below, she wasn't going to be locked in the Tower, but you still never saw her again.
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#404 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
Since I never got to see the end of Korra, is this part of the original, or something you've added?
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The bits that are coming will be a combination of what actually happened in the show and bits that are obvious changes given how things have been changed in TPOAN. Just like the changes to the taking of Zaofu.LadyTevar wrote:Since I never got to see the end of Korra, is this part of the original, or something you've added?
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"Come on, who wouldn't trade a few dozen square miles of French countryside for Warp 3.5?" - Marina
"The chance of Shep talking his way into the control room for an ICBM is probably higher than that." - Seth
"Come on, who wouldn't trade a few dozen square miles of French countryside for Warp 3.5?" - Marina
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#406 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
Please tell me she didn't have that weapon in the original.
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#407 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
She did, actually. Just wait to see what she mounted it on.
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"The chance of Shep talking his way into the control room for an ICBM is probably higher than that." - Seth
"Come on, who wouldn't trade a few dozen square miles of French countryside for Warp 3.5?" - Marina
"The chance of Shep talking his way into the control room for an ICBM is probably higher than that." - Seth
"Come on, who wouldn't trade a few dozen square miles of French countryside for Warp 3.5?" - Marina
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#408 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
She did NOT put it on a Mecha did she?
Please tell me Korra smashs her down soon.
Please tell me Korra smashs her down soon.
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#409 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
There is a reason that the first half of the finale is called "Day of the Colossus"....LadyTevar wrote:She did NOT put it on a Mecha did she?
Please tell me Korra smashs her down soon.
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"The chance of Shep talking his way into the control room for an ICBM is probably higher than that." - Seth
"Come on, who wouldn't trade a few dozen square miles of French countryside for Warp 3.5?" - Marina
"The chance of Shep talking his way into the control room for an ICBM is probably higher than that." - Seth
"Come on, who wouldn't trade a few dozen square miles of French countryside for Warp 3.5?" - Marina
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#410 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
SONNUVA BITCH!
Sato died for the right cause, at least. Otherwise, let's get this bitch and her mechanical maniac down. I also want answers: Why's the Master pulling this shit?!
Sato died for the right cause, at least. Otherwise, let's get this bitch and her mechanical maniac down. I also want answers: Why's the Master pulling this shit?!
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To me, Roger DelGardo will ALWAYS be The Master
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Where to start getting help with The Master:
HARRY DRESDEN.
HARRY DRESDEN.
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#413 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
Still have the twitch with the drums, I see. I have to wonder if this is before he ran to the end of the universe now.
But yeah... bombs set to blow? So Evil Genius.
But yeah... bombs set to blow? So Evil Genius.
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#414 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
Typos, Typos everywhere. STEVE, go back thru those chapters THIS MINUTE and fix it.
And then take your time to postthe next one.
And then take your time to postthe next one.
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#415 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
Uh.... what? I spell-checked it.
Chatniks on the (nonexistant) risks of the Large Hadron Collector:
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#416 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
Drums in his head. He's trying to release Gallifrey.
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#417 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
DAMMIT DAMMIT DAMMIT! ENOUGH WITH THE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!
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LadyTevar wrote:DAMMIT DAMMIT DAMMIT! ENOUGH WITH THE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!
Chatniks on the (nonexistant) risks of the Large Hadron Collector:
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"Come on, who wouldn't trade a few dozen square miles of French countryside for Warp 3.5?" - Marina
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*APPLAUDS*
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That is a great ending. *applauds*
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#421 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
Holy fuck... you're actually going to have the Doctors meet the faux-Doc.
Wait......... wasnt' there an episode of the nWhu that did that?
Wait......... wasnt' there an episode of the nWhu that did that?
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YES!!! VASH THE STAMPEDE!!!
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#423 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
Adn the Plot Thickens.
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#424 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
Ok, when even the Q-Continium gets in on it, you know you're done dickin' around.
Nice touch with 10's suit, tho.
Nice touch with 10's suit, tho.
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TAHALSHIA. The last name is TAHALSHIA. Blackthorne was one of them, and married to Tevar (Teamhair) in the game, and they had a boy & a girl. Nitram was the Head of the House, and (secretly) a minor god who'd slipped off the Belief system when Shadows-in-the-Night stopped being scary.The Blackthornes for instance. Sorcerer family in the Appalachians, of British and Celtic stock. Named Nitram and Tevar.... wait, no, their names are....
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