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LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Fri Jun 29, 2007 7:47 pm

Cynical Cat wrote:Yep. And the illustration for the Winning Smile Talent is pure gold.

I demand to see the picture.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Fri Jul 06, 2007 1:44 pm

Man am I glad to see more Earthdawn. Needs more Trolls though

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon Jul 09, 2007 9:08 pm

TYPO PATROL!

Since you called me a hag

"And people wonder we most people leave this business feet first," finished Gil.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue Jul 10, 2007 5:20 am

More Typos.. Only where the battle gets good, oddly enough. You must have been caught up in the excitement.

With a bellow her ordered the surrounding vrocks into battle

and the demons through back their heads and screamed.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue Jul 24, 2007 5:33 am

My dear, it was a great story, and StarScream is going to be very pissed about DeathStrike taking over the Seekers like that

However, there were major typos:

...on my mark I you to teleport ...

...the Decepticon heavy fighter ignored the Autobots to concentrate on the Autobots....

..."Groundhammer, Anvilbreaker, hit the Guardian with everything you've got!" Deathstrike ordered. "Form up for another pass," he ordered the other Seekers. "Keep hitting the Autobots. I'll finish the Guardian. Anvilbreaker, Groundhammer, shift fire to the Autobots."...

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sat Jul 28, 2007 2:05 pm

I am so glad Blackheart's on our side.......

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon Jul 30, 2007 7:19 pm

Well.. that was a short one for Maladar.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed Aug 01, 2007 7:31 am

Typo Patrol: Mostly because it's confusing who's acting.

They would be on the adventurers in moments. Streamers of pastel light stretched out from his hands to lash at the adventurers.

The elephant's magic tore down Nalifan's wall, exposing all of his comrades to its deadly magic

Otherwise... WOW... that was a fast, furious assault, but it still seems the Proto-God died a little too easily.

Then again, 4 20+level characters with heavy enchantments and max skills will do that.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Aug 02, 2007 10:14 am

"Insect Spirits! RUN!"

Yeah.. that about covers it. Unless it's cockroaches, where there's one, there's twenty. With cockroaches, you've either got just the one.... or two hundred.

RE: Daleks ...
Nice, we get to see a little more of the Great Plan.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon Aug 06, 2007 5:22 am

And that is why Chicago is BugCity.

Just because the majority of the queens are sleeping, doesn't mean their babies aren't protecting the hives.

Post by **B4UTRUST** » Mon Aug 06, 2007 7:13 am

Poor Chase...

*feels Chase's pain* *realizes suddenly that he is Chase, or at least the creator thereof* *feel's his own pain?*

My baby...you scratched my baby!

Tell me Chase seeks vengence by nuking a small section of the air port...

Agent Fisher · Post by **Agent Fisher** » Mon Aug 06, 2007 11:50 pm

And Wraith lived! Yay!

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed Aug 08, 2007 5:39 am

The question is how much of the Elf and Ork's sanity is left?

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sun Aug 19, 2007 1:44 pm

Well well... Not seen Karesh in a long time. What made you dust him off?

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Mon Aug 20, 2007 12:02 am

LadyTevar wrote:Well well... Not seen Karesh in a long time. What made you dust him off?

Felt like writing, but not on one of my more recent stories. Shifted through and found something I was in the mood to write.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon Aug 20, 2007 5:37 am

Cynical Cat wrote:
LadyTevar wrote:Well well... Not seen Karesh in a long time. What made you dust him off?
Felt like writing, but not on one of my more recent stories. Shifted through and found something I was in the mood to write.

I'd nearly forgotten about him, actually. Glad you found him.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Aug 23, 2007 5:29 am

I see why Deathstryke rose so quickly among the Decepticons. I hope he can pull similar miracles among the Autobots.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Sun Sep 02, 2007 11:48 pm

YAY! More to the Strong! So basically I get a chapter for every good website I feed you?

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Mon Sep 03, 2007 12:02 am

frigidmagi wrote:YAY! More to the Strong! So basically I get a chapter for every good website I feed you?

Actually, it works that I'll prioritize anything I feel like writing based on feedback from people I like. Ask and you tend to receive.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon Sep 03, 2007 1:56 pm

Cynical Cat wrote:
frigidmagi wrote:YAY! More to the Strong! So basically I get a chapter for every good website I feed you?
Actually, it works that I'll prioritize anything I feel like writing based on feedback from people I like. Ask and you tend to receive.

So if I ask you to finish Whirlwind?

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Mon Sep 03, 2007 2:30 pm

LadyTevar wrote:
Cynical Cat wrote:
frigidmagi wrote:YAY! More to the Strong! So basically I get a chapter for every good website I feed you?
Actually, it works that I'll prioritize anything I feel like writing based on feedback from people I like. Ask and you tend to receive.
So if I ask you to finish Whirlwind?

I'll work at it. I have to figure out how to bulk out the next installment.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Wed Sep 05, 2007 2:00 pm

"So," said Sylvetria, looking up at the stormclouds above Neridian, "are we still going to burn the city?" The adventurers had halted on the side of the road, several miles from the outskirts of the city. Mist streamed from the Vaasan's lips. "Because it looks like someone beat us to it. Figuratively."

BUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Hope y'all are dressed warmly!

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed Sep 05, 2007 7:38 pm

They dohave to go and save the Silly Ice Mage from the insane psycher.

Umbras · Post by **Umbras** » Thu Sep 06, 2007 12:24 am

The elements don't bother Trizkel that much anymore, he learned from his first trip to the surface. The beginning of the campaign left him on the surface during a winter brought on by magic and it was not pleasant as he only had clothing suitable to living in the under dark. He has developed a power that allows him to handle hostile environments and of course he has a magic item for his lady that allows her to ignore extreme cold if needed.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue Sep 11, 2007 10:36 pm

Typo Patrol!

"Yessss," his Flamewind,
"I see your lossening up,"

So, StarJammer was an (accused) criminal? Makes one wonder how she 'protested' the Council's 'lies'. Always two sides of a story, with the truth in the center. Wonder why Megs protected her in the Ring? Either way, it got him a loyal ally.

Is the next chapter going to be 'Stryke's Rebellion, or will there be another chapter leading up to it?

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