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LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon Sep 29, 2008 7:52 pm

Once again... you write fascinating battles!

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Wed Oct 01, 2008 12:17 pm

Give me feedback on my attempt at epic lightsaber dueling.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed Oct 01, 2008 12:40 pm

heh... who says the Blaster is a crude, inelegant weapon?

Fantastic fight, great use of Force TK, and highly entertaining.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed Oct 01, 2008 7:16 pm

Ok... that's a helluva ritual to do that to Nal!

Rogue 9 · Post by **Rogue 9** » Wed Oct 01, 2008 8:37 pm

Well, the prince is apparently a right bastard.

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Wed Oct 01, 2008 9:27 pm

Rogue 9 wrote:Well, the prince is apparently a right bastard.

That came through huh? Wasn't to subtle about it?

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Thu Oct 02, 2008 1:16 am

Nalifan is married? When did that happen?

The Nomad · Post by **The Nomad** » Thu Oct 02, 2008 10:19 am

I did not know that beings from one material plane could summon people from another material one and bind them as true outsiders. In which book is it mentionned?

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Thu Oct 02, 2008 10:35 am

The Nomad wrote:I did not knew that beings from one material plane could summon people from another material one and bind them as true outsiders. In which book is it mentionned?

It isn't. It isn't forbidden either.

The Nomad · Post by **The Nomad** » Thu Oct 02, 2008 12:17 pm

Creative liberty, I see. I wonder how many updates the prince is going to live through...

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Thu Oct 02, 2008 12:49 pm

frigidmagi wrote:Nalifan is married? When did that happen?

Off page. You might have noticed the "true love" thing (actually, its drow equivalent) happening.

The Nomad · Post by **The Nomad** » Thu Oct 02, 2008 1:49 pm

Since Nalifan was dressed, Elvarra won't be too pissed off - but if Nalifan had been summoned naked, panting and sweating, well, Baator hath no fury etc...

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Oct 02, 2008 4:32 pm

The Nomad wrote:Since Nalifan was dressed, Elvarra won't be too pissed off - but if Nalifan had been summoned naked, panting and sweating, well, Baator hath no fury etc...

He'd not have 8 hours to hide himself, either... she'd have had us out looking withing 30min (the time it took to get us together)

I'm also wondering how long before Nal gets to knock around the prince "in the name of Kingdom Security".

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Sat Oct 04, 2008 1:08 pm

Nal is as charming as ever I see. Still as honest as ever. One thinks he is lucky (well maybe not luck so much as raw talent and backbreaking effort to get it but that's not as catchy to say) that he has so much power otherwise he may have lost that tongue by now

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Sat Oct 04, 2008 1:32 pm

frigidmagi wrote:Nal is as charming as ever I see. Still as honest as ever. One thinks he is lucky (well maybe not luck so much as raw talent and backbreaking effort to get it but that's not as catchy to say) that he has so much power otherwise he may have lost that tongue by now

Also one of the things that makes him an unconventional drow. Matron mothers do not respond well to their underlings rolling their eyes and saying "fine, we'll do it your way. And when that fails we'll do it my way and succeed."

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sun Oct 05, 2008 9:37 pm

Interesting way to get a bit of background on the politics here.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon Oct 06, 2008 6:39 pm

I see Nitram got his wish

Now... where's OverShock to beat Menasor down a little, hmm? Or start as BreachLoad, soften Menasor up with a few big shots.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue Oct 07, 2008 11:31 am

I think I like it more when you're being philosophical for him...

.........
Nah, your action scenes are too good to leave out.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed Oct 08, 2008 5:50 am

That's a rather blunt way to ask a girl to sleep with him.

But again, the plot thickens with these priests and priestly warriors...

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Oct 09, 2008 9:10 pm

Well... that explains why OverShock didn't show up to beat down Menasor. Looks like that will be another chapter.

"Tackling Menasor without weapon. Big Processors"

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon Oct 13, 2008 6:11 pm

Shit.....

I thought the Jedi had him.
*winces* That... that was far too brutal.

Great fight, great writing, but a real downer of an ending. Still, everything can't be all Happiness and Light.

But damn, that was brutal.

Rogue 9 · Post by **Rogue 9** » Mon Oct 13, 2008 7:08 pm

Of course it was. We're talking about Sith.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed Oct 15, 2008 9:00 am

Very nicely done. Glad you're feeling better *hugs*

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed Oct 15, 2008 3:01 pm

.............
"I find your lack of faith .. disturbing."

What a way to shake up THAT old joke

And with the general state of nobles in this court, I don't think Nalifan will need any magic at all to defeat this pompous idjit.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:30 pm

ANd, in killing a fool, he gains a quiet ally ... or so it seems.

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