#1 Author Feedback: SirNitram
Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 10:25 pm
Read and comment, puny mortals! My first venture into writing 40k. I hope I got a good feel down.
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#2
Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 10:35 pm
My god Nitram.... That was intense!
#3
Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 11:05 pm
Pretty good.
#4
Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 11:39 am
I enjoyed it.
#5
Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 9:09 pm
RE: The Only Witness
Interesting...I rather like it.
Interesting...I rather like it.
#6
Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 9:15 pm
I am really liking this.
And am I the only one who figured out what this guy is?
And am I the only one who figured out what this guy is?
#7
Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 9:32 pm
Only Witness:
POST MORE OFTEN GODDAMMIT!!!!
and yes, CT, I think we all know who/what Charl is. But I'm to "not give it away" *eyes the husband over her shoulder*
POST MORE OFTEN GODDAMMIT!!!!
and yes, CT, I think we all know who/what Charl is. But I'm to "not give it away" *eyes the husband over her shoulder*
#8
Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 9:37 pm
Just making sure.
#9
Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 6:27 pm
*dies laughing* I love his reaction to going home with her ... and then to the 'inn'.
#10
Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 6:56 pm
Daaammmmnnnnn.... That was brutal Nit. So the Coke thing was to throw the cops off guard and make the Pally look crazy?
#11
Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 7:49 pm
It looked like it worked, too. DAMN, that was a nasty trick on our little Paly.
#12
Posted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 12:57 am
...
Smite via unarmed strike?
Smite via unarmed strike?
#13
Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 3:43 am
The cops got fooled by flour? Crap on a stick.
#14
Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 8:32 am
Great job, m'love!
#15
Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 7:23 pm
Fantastic Job!! That was just perfect!
Now, you just have to finish it
Now, you just have to finish it
#16
Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 7:51 pm
excellent
You know what this really needs? Charl Matrixing with Divine Grace through a hail of bullets.
You know what this really needs? Charl Matrixing with Divine Grace through a hail of bullets.
#17
Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 12:12 am
Arthur? Was that fucking King Arthur?
#18
Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 5:54 am
[singsong] I know who it ii-ss I know who it ii-ss
I aint a'tellin' I ain't a-tellin![/singsong]
But it aint no King.
I aint a'tellin' I ain't a-tellin![/singsong]
But it aint no King.
#19
Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 8:19 am
My love, you do not write nearly often enough.
#20
Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 8:06 pm
Repentent Iron Warriors?!?
#21
Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 9:44 pm
Mwhahahahahahahahahahafrigidmagi wrote:Repentent Iron Warriors?!?
Although he does need to clean it up a little... the Guardsmen mentioned are NOT with the Inquistitor.
#22
Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 11:35 pm
Once again, m'love. You don't post often, but when you do it's fantastic.
#23
Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 1:55 am
Excellent work, Nitram - and not just because I've a soft spot for the Exalted universe.
It flowed well, the characterizations evoked the imagination well. Good work.
It flowed well, the characterizations evoked the imagination well. Good work.
#24
Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 9:12 am
That was interesting although I honestly don't know much about exalted. I kinda saw the Gravtius part coming.
#25
Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 9:18 am
Is't it just like Gravitas to have a universe to contemplate so he lets everything else fall away? 