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#1 Feed Back for Pounder

Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 9:30 am
by Lord Pounder
I woiuld appreciate any feed back on this

Thanks

#2

Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 11:47 am
by The Cleric
Very few typos, which is always good.


I'll wait for a bit more before I comment storyline wise.