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#1 Author Feedback: Haizu

Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 11:26 pm
by Haizu
Hey, just like I said in the Armageddon Rising post, put your feedback in here.

#2

Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 11:36 pm
by LadyTevar
As I pointed out to Bloody Good: New Paragraphs every time someone else speaks. Makes it MUCH easier to read.

Please fix that, and I'll try to get through more than the first paragraph.

#3

Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 1:30 pm
by Haizu
Oh yeah, thanx for reminding me. I'll get on that later today. Thanx though.

#4

Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 2:23 pm
by Haizu
Alright it's fixed. Have another look. It should be much better now.

#5

Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 6:26 pm
by Haizu
C'mon people! What do you think of it?

#6

Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 8:35 pm
by LadyTevar
Muuch better. Keep posting :)

#7

Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 1:48 pm
by Haizu
Well that's all I have right now. I going to do some more today or tommorrow.

#8

Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 5:10 pm
by LadyTevar
Suggestion: The new chapters can be added as new Posts, hon... that way we don't have to sort through to find where the new stuff starts.

#9

Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 9:03 pm
by Haizu
oh yeah, my bad, lol