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Magi finally twisted my arm, so I'm here now as well. Steve has been posting most of my stuff lately, but I didn't see Triple Threat up, so I've posted it now that it is complete.

And yes, I'm a newb when it comes to writing, any and all feedback is really appreciated, even of the 'that SUCKS' variety

Do more than 10 asterix for a scene shift again, and I will hurt you. It broke the formatting, so I had to go into your post and remove all the extra asterix.

PS: The last scene with them in the maintainence closet got cut off. Might want to either edit it, or remove it for a new thread as you continue the story.

And I highly suggest continuing the story. I'm hooked.

It did get cut off, and I was so tired when I posted that I didn't notice! I posted the rest into the reply, and it *looks* like it worked fine.

Sorry about the asterix, when I looked at the preview it looked fine, I editted the rest of the demarqs to 10.

And I'm glad you are enjoying it!

I enjoyed the story. It had a good Shadowrunny feel and the characters were fun. I hope to see more of them someday. I also hope to see more of your writings.

Mr Johnson is always a sneaky bastard, no matter what genre.

I loved it... although you should have had at least one of the other triplets enter the room with 'Anne', just to give Michael and Stephan a shock ;)

Everything is better with swivel chairs.

I liked the story. It was fun, even if there were no Zohan.

Ed already has a couple more stories in mind for Anne, Annika, and Alicia. :) Plus they may be making an appearance in one of the core TGG fictions rather soon.....

I believe the next one he intends to do will be a prequel to Triple Threat that shows them operating as freelancers, and delve into their origins as well.

Well, Triple Trouble has started, the prequel to Triple Threat. Hope you folks enjoy it as much!

I find this interesting, although I am wondering how the triplets are gonna take on a pirate crew with ship attached. I assume the suffering "ligit" pirates are gonna be allies, as they certainly want this band of madmax bandits gone.

Sweet Lord in Heaven you gave the mass murdering gang rapist a warship!?!

Do you know what you can do with a warship even a clunky obsolete one?

frigidmagi wrote:Sweet Lord in Heaven you gave the mass murdering gang rapist a warship!?!

Do you know what you can do with a warship even a clunky obsolete one?

Yes, yes I do. tum tum tum

Keep it coming Ed. I'm sure Magi and Tev will appreciate it.

Pretty Humane Shadowrunner community there but it works.