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frigidmagi wrote:Can't say, like any sensible Marine I know the Rifle is best weapon on Earth. :wink:
If Joe was packing a M-16, he would be doing much better than 50% at this range.
As for my pistol skills otherwise, I did qaul on Okinawa for them and did alright, not great but not terrible either. To even pass you have to shot a bit better then 50%.
And doing so under combat conditions, especially against moving targets, is harder. None of the werewolves are great marksmen, although Jason is a bit prone to delusions of grandeur in this area. Joseph is good enough with a gun to get the job done, but he isn't going to win any shooting competitions.
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Fair enough, I would like to note that they could use some unit practice but that common enough.
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frigidmagi wrote:Fair enough, I would like to note that they could use some unit practice but that common enough.
Yep, although this whole "we'll use guns and not shape shift" thing doesn't help. They're usually better coordinated.
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So, whose interested in me writing Drow murder poetry so that Nalifan can recite it?
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Cynical Cat wrote:So, whose interested in me writing Drow murder poetry so that Nalifan can recite it?
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Cynical Cat wrote:So, whose interested in me writing Drow murder poetry so that Nalifan can recite it?
Yes. Yes you should
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Ok.. that was fantastic.

The murder ballad is at once sexual, sickening, and protrays a crowing victory.
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[Vogon] So tell me, how did you like my poetry?[/Vogon]
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Ah... scholar, warrior and poet... Nalifan is my hero (and rarely do I want to do interesting things to fictional characters but in this case I make an exception)
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Other than the typos.. that was a great story!

And it proves why holding something in reserve is always a good idea. So's having Gifts that work on Gnosis when something steals away your Rage. :wink:
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I really hope that the answer didn't include Nalifan fucking his consort.

But I can't think of why else she'd screamed, other than the knowledge Nal sealed himself off to not be found.
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I really hope that the answer didn't include Nalifan fucking his consort.
Concubine. Consort is in reference to a married partner, usually a married partner of royalty or nobility.
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frigidmagi wrote:
I really hope that the answer didn't include Nalifan fucking his consort.
Concubine. Consort is in reference to a married partner, usually a married partner of royalty or nobility.
Eeek.
Yes, I meant Concubine.

Although if that's Cyncat's idea of SEX... he's reading the wrong porn.
What happened, Cat? You promised me SEX, not teasing!
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If you want porn there's an entire internet for that. Go explore.
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Going... To... Need... Bigger... Guns. And C4. Much C4.
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Carnivora.... nasty title. But since it seems that these people get their power from eating their enemies, it fits.

Yeah, these guys need killing. BAD
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Are we going to get a little more backstory on our Good Captain? :lol:
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Now that was one way to hook a reader into a story. Tell me more of Karpaty, Cyncat.
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Run little vampire, run.
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So it's a basic family unit... Shouldn't said goddess have priestess?
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frigidmagi wrote:So it's a basic family unit... Shouldn't said goddess have priestess?
She does, but the Father is the head of the household and so males dominate the upper ranks of the priesthood. I'll be going into more detail on the status of women later, but in short its a little better than typical medieval Europe in part because of that.
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So, a dead end. Now what?
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LadyTevar wrote:So, a dead end. Now what?
Guess. And "more trouble" doesn't count.
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She does, but the Father is the head of the household and so males dominate the upper ranks of the priesthood. I'll be going into more detail on the status of women later, but in short its a little better than typical medieval Europe in part because of that.
Okay, I can wait til you're ready. Be interesting to see what the feminine cult is like.
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A very nice addition to the Half-fiend's story. Amusing that he found himself inspired by a paladin
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