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oooooooo... that's an OhFuck moment.

I'm actually hoping for Warhulk to save them
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First, I'm glad you finally got back to posting more Maladar.

Second, I hope this thrust to the "Belt Cities" is not a mistake.
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That was well done and pretty ballsy. It does help make the bad guys more of a threat.
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:shock:

YOU KILLED ELITA-1 ?!?!?!?!?
YOU BASTARD!!!!
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Oh nice... another Vae Victus story!
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Waiting for Nalifan to get back to the city. I imagine the retribution will be... excessive. Hopefully at least.
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The Cleric wrote:Waiting for Nalifan to get back to the city. I imagine the retribution will be... excessive. Hopefully at least.
He is bound from harming the prince or any of the kings' kin. He can use an intermediary, but that would be politically problematic. He will need to strike the prince's friends, through hirelings, in all likelyhood. Either that or place them in positions where they can "die gloriously"
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I'd settle for horribly violent ends for all the underlings, and pure terror for the prince. And it's not like he'll be bound forever...
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True. Were I Nal I would come back after the year was over... heh.

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Comrade Tortoise wrote:True. Were I Nal I would come back after the year was over... heh.

"You enslaved me and now you will die"
*sigh* He's bound not to take revenge.
It's not that I'm unforgiving, it's that most of the people who wrong me are unrepentant assholes.
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Indeed.

But there are many options for him to make the prince pay using the Laws of the Land. Which would humiliate the prince just as badly, having to pay him for the damage done. The Prince's friends will be the ones in real trouble. Nalifan's well trained, and no one will ever be able to prove their deaths were his fault.

It does piss me off that the clerics here aren't talented enough to heal her without scars. I wonder if that is their lack, or their prejudices against Whores. :evil:
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I see Blackheart's talking to you again. :grin:

Nasty trap they set up. The bosses are several steps ahead of the 'good guys'.
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LadyTevar wrote:Indeed.

But there are many options for him to make the prince pay using the Laws of the Land. Which would humiliate the prince just as badly, having to pay him for the damage done. The Prince's friends will be the ones in real trouble. Nalifan's well trained, and no one will ever be able to prove their deaths were his fault.
Yeah, they're real afraid of the Law and there will be no repercussions if Nalifan kills the sons of high ranking nobles.
It does piss me off that the clerics here aren't talented enough to heal her without scars. I wonder if that is their lack, or their prejudices against Whores. :evil:
The whole issue of healing with or without scars isn't something that's addressed in most healing spells.
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Good to see you writing Blackheart again.
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I've missed Blackheart as well.
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"poor boy can't get a break at all"
Except for the fact that now his lungs are not going to have any trouble with any kind of breathing problems, because of the Black Heart.

I'm glad you're continuing this. I'm just wondering what you'll do when it's time to 'start game'. Personally, I'd like to see an Alt-history, since ours was so fucked up.
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I already have some good lines for Argent.
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It will be interesting to see how THAT relationship turns out, yes. :lol:

And damn, the Carnivora survived. But still, 10 days was a good chunk of time for Nalifan to work within.
I'm still waiting to see his reprisals against those who hurt Lania.
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I have to wonder if crashing through the building and into caustic chemicals was good for the Titan.
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LadyTevar wrote:I have to wonder if crashing through the building and into caustic chemicals was good for the Titan.
It isn't, but massive amounts of armour means that it can take that kind of abuse.
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Nalifan is at heart very practical. He's bound, so he can't get his own revenge. When time comes those bonds loosen a little, THEN there will be massive reprisals.

Nasty trick, making the Mother weep blood. Very nice pious act, that will somehow be blamed on Nal or on the Princess' "unseemly" love for her maid.
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Ah, the Double Sham marriage...
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And here I thought he was disapproving of her lifestyle. He was just disapproving of her OPENNESS... and maybe a bit jealous?
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Ya can't find the loopholes if you don't know the text of the Law, now can you :twisted:

Besides... how many of the Lords and Priests actually KNOW the law, hmm? After all, if they've 'always done it that way', they may have never needed to read the law, and therefore may have forgotten a nasty little trick within.
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BRILLIANT!
The CatLord will be the one being Nal won't hide from, because he'll want his aid at some point :twisted:
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