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A Gith.......... caring about another being?

Did the Planes just have a reality-shift? :shock:
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No. That's the Rule Of Endings, which is remarked to be a Rule Of Three(Three things are in it). The Rule Of Three is that three is the number coming up. If you see two, there WILL be a third.
I prefer "Nothing really ends." myself Nit.
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A Gith.......... caring about another being?
You know for all the hype and shit, they did descent from human beings. Sure they're raised in a militant, hate-filled culture that would freak out your average nazi. They're still not that different from us in the end.
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furry and murderous, secret keeping, magic loving subjects
Why no, we're not CatLovers, what makes you think that? :twisted:

New chapters, and both a lot of fun. I can't wait to see where it goes next.
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The obsidian mines were a death sentence to all but the few who managed to ingratiate themselves to the templars that they became personal pets. Mostly that was very pretty women and boys. It certainly wasn't me. However, just as Hamanu's iron law mandated that slaves be rested and watered during the hottest part of the day
You didn't finish that sentence, babe.

But I'm interested. I've yet to see a story of yours I've not liked.
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The girl's acting more and more Clueless.
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I was wondering when you'd post the end to that fight.

Ultima came out on the losing end there, and those running corpses are going to cause a lot of trouble and clean up.
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Nasty raid that was.
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It got the job done.. Several Ultima metas down, a lot of civilians who trust in their protection dead.
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Wow. *fans self* Yeah.. Nalifan's Chr score is far too powerful for a young girl like that.

And interesting to see how the devil is changing the spirit of the agreement, and the prince is eating it up.
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LadyTevar wrote:Wow. *fans self* Yeah.. Nalifan's Chr score is far too powerful for a young girl like that.

And interesting to see how the devil is changing the spirit of the agreement, and the prince is eating it up.
He's not really changing the agreement. He's adjusting his plans to deal with an unexpected fly in the ointment. The devil doesn't get paid if the prince doesn't sit his arse down on the throne and devils like to get paid. It makes sense to milk as much as he can out of Nal before getting him killed.
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This sounds nasty, if it's only one step below a Dragon.

And I know,t hey don't have Dragons there. Real dragons, anyway. I always wondered what would happen if one could get there via a portal...
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LadyTevar wrote:This sounds nasty, if it's only one step below a Dragon.

And I know,t hey don't have Dragons there. Real dragons, anyway. I always wondered what would happen if one could get there via a portal...
Splat is what would happen if it crossed the Dragon. Athas has elemental drakes, which are roughly equivalent to normal dragons.
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I thought their Dragons were evolved Humans?
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LadyTevar wrote:I thought their Dragons were evolved Humans?
They are. Drakes are dragon-like elemental creatures with psionics. Drakes tend to be a little the "upper mid level to high level" dragon slot. They don't get great red wyrm bad, but they're pretty tough.
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Ahhhhhhhhhhh. That makes a lot of sense.
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Everyone has choices. Sometimes the right choices are the most dangerous.


I can't wait to see how the battle goes.
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It would just kill Blackheart if he lost Valkyrie and IronMike to his curse. :cry:
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[quote]"Do we still have some of that late Twenty-Second Century alt universe Russian military hardware in the arsenal?" Blackheart asked. "Because I think we're going to need it."[/url]
And THIS is why Blackheart was a damn fuckin' good agent. He knew when to call in the Heavy Weapons.

Ok, Cyncat, you know we're waiting for the next chapter. We're expecting another all-out smackdown with bodies flying and metas throwing powers every which way. :twisted:
Don't keep us waiting!
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There is just something WRONG with CorpseKing going down that easily, after we saw him kickin Ultima ass. Body of steel, Mind of Kleenex? He went down like a pussy!
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OK, that was a battle. I loved it.


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Blackheart? You either have the Best Luck, or the WORST.
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He gargled into his throat mike and tried not to die.
Now that line is just classic bro.
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Problem solved.
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Wow.. that was a great battle, Cat.
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I really do like your Megatron and Prime more then the standard. Your Prime isn't that wildly different but your Megatron... He feels like a competent leader. You can understand why those bastards follow him to the end of the universe and back.
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