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Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Wed Jul 01, 2009 12:14 am

frigidmagi wrote:I really do like your Megatron and Prime more then the standard. Your Prime isn't that wildly different but your Megatron... He feels like a competent leader. You can understand why those bastards follow him to the end of the universe and back.

Thanks. I don't think my Megatron is that much different from G1 Megatron, just placed in a more realistic and coherent story as well as removed from the formula that means he must have an evil plan and be defeated within 1/2 hour.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Wed Jul 01, 2009 3:10 am

I don't know about that, in the G1 cartoon he was often meaninglessly sadistic and abusive towards his troops.

Much like the current puppet despot of Cybertron. I will admit I respect Warhulk and he died well.

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Wed Jul 01, 2009 11:23 am

frigidmagi wrote:I don't know about that, in the G1 cartoon he was often meaninglessly sadistic and abusive towards his troops.

I can't recall him being gratuitously abusive towards any Decepticon. Starscream got verbally bitch slapped a lot, but Starscream tended to run his mouth off.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed Jul 01, 2009 2:43 pm

I echo Frigid here.. Warhulk died a noble death, and I'm actually sorry to see him go.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed Jul 01, 2009 2:59 pm

I think what might save the world from Black Arion is if they make Germany's mistake and take on two fronts at once.

I want to see what Blackheart does with his Furlough.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue Jul 07, 2009 5:01 pm

The "gee whiz mister!" scene with the kids was great. I'm sure many of them started searching the 'Net for that snippet just to say they met him.

The glares of hatred in Chicago might be trouble, but as I've said before he's On Furlough. Booze, Hookers, and Tattoos. Knowing Blackheart's luck, however, there will be a drunken brawl at some point.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue Jul 07, 2009 5:15 pm

TF. I swear you try to make Stryke pussy-whipped.

Either way, you're doing great with the team. But as Nit said "Why'd it have to be KUPP?"
(although the new IDW Kupp is a lot better. More Sgt. Rock)

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Tue Jul 07, 2009 5:23 pm

LadyTevar wrote:TF. I swear you try to make Stryke pussy-whipped.

Now how did you get that out of the last installment?

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue Jul 07, 2009 7:35 pm

Cynical Cat wrote:
LadyTevar wrote:TF. I swear you try to make Stryke pussy-whipped.
Now how did you get that out of the last installment?

I reread all of them earlier

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Jul 09, 2009 5:03 pm

That was a very quietly powerful chapter, Cat.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sat Jul 11, 2009 12:34 pm

"I had Deathstrike practically crawling down my engines!"

That was the line that made me laugh. Nice to know everyone's favorite 'Con has that fearsome a rep.

He is built for deep space interception and heavy ground attack. Sending him after a fleeing Astrotrain is exactly what he's built for.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Wed Jul 15, 2009 2:32 am

Annnd Megatron hits the ground running.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed Jul 15, 2009 6:07 am

"I've done this before Megatron," said Starscream as he launched a pair of missiles.

That should be a sneer, imho.

I've edited a couple spelling mistakes, but as Frigid said, Megatron hit the ground running. I'd wondered where Megatron was, and for a moment why Starscream was using a silver/black pistol. When you clarified, it was a 'oh DUH!' moment for me.

Great Job.

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Wed Jul 15, 2009 2:12 pm

LadyTevar wrote: I've edited a couple spelling mistakes, but as Frigid said, Megatron hit the ground running.

Don't ever do that again. I need to see my mistakes, not have them vanish on me.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Jul 16, 2009 5:54 am

Cynical Cat wrote:
LadyTevar wrote: I've edited a couple spelling mistakes, but as Frigid said, Megatron hit the ground running.
Don't ever do that again. I need to see my mistakes, not have them vanish on me.

I'm sorry, hon.
They're still in the SDN copy. I looked it over while working and they leapt out at me.

Mostly spelling errors.. Their/There. A few seem to have words missing.

Do want the one on the left or the right

Do You, I'm assuming.

Get your pets better for battle

Better = ready?

It all seems to be things from rushing to get your ideas down on paper, so to speak. It bugged me horribly as I tried to read the story.
I'm sorry. Next time I'll go back to saving up all the typos and posting them to you so you can see them yourself :sad:

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Wed Jul 22, 2009 5:02 am

"The majority of us lord," she replied. House Mustarios was the largest single share holder in Callivern. "A few of your House's own armsmen, a few from other ships looking for new births, and a handful of battlefleet veterans. "

Unless there's some 40K thing I don't know about, I think you mean berths bro.

This is from the first section of the new update, 4th paragraph down. Otherwise I'm enjoying the story. Is the navigator going to be the only psionic on board? Someone had told me that some of the houses kept tame ones for protection and such?

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Wed Jul 22, 2009 11:06 am

frigidmagi wrote: Is the navigator going to be the only psionic on board? Someone had told me that some of the houses kept tame ones for protection and such?

Noble houses and starships both often have psykers on staff. Yes, the ship will have a few.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Jul 30, 2009 4:04 pm

Oh, very nice

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed Sep 09, 2009 7:15 pm

You rock, babe.

Argent wants to thank the bartender for training Blackheart so well.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed Sep 16, 2009 6:56 pm

Matador thinks Blackheart's an annoying fuck? Been around him too long, hasn't he... :sad:

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon Sep 21, 2009 5:46 pm

Crap. Take out Taskmaster, and that takes out the one agency actually able to do something about Black Arion.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Mon Sep 21, 2009 5:52 pm

Is the Soviet Union still standing in this timeline?

You know the best solution to Black Heart's problem may simply be to not have him on a team permanently but as a one man reaction force. That or keep him on a number of teams but rotating out so that he's never exposed to them long enough to impact the team dynamics.

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Mon Sep 21, 2009 5:59 pm

frigidmagi wrote:Is the Soviet Union still standing in this timeline?

The Soviet Union is still around. Essentially they're in better shape because of metahumans and they go along with the liberalizations in the 80s, but dig in their heels and arrest Yeltsin et. al. when they try to break up the Soviet Union in the 90s.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Mon Sep 21, 2009 9:40 pm

What of the Warsaw Pact? Also I imagine the Baltic States are less then happy.

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Tue Sep 22, 2009 12:28 am

frigidmagi wrote:What of the Warsaw Pact? Also I imagine the Baltic States are less then happy.

Warsaw Pact breaks up about the same way it does in real life. The Baltic States could be happier, but Russia doesn't get looted and run down like it did in real life so they're not as unhappy as they could be. Also, their ethnic minorities are happier since the Baltic States loose the opportunity to be dicks to them.

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