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#376 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
Yeah... Color-coded Daleks, to match the freakin' Power Rangers.
Fuck I was way off.
Fuck I was way off.
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#377 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
When you said you were calling ALL RANGERS, you meant it! How many even remember the Aquitarian Rangers?!
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#378 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
Yes, he's making a HUGE mistake. This is not a time for Triumphant or WarDoctor.
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#379 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
Sometimes the best way to examine a being's purpose is to bring it into question and have them driven to turn away from it, however briefly.LadyTevar wrote:Yes, he's making a HUGE mistake. This is not a time for Triumphant or WarDoctor.
He will see the truth soon enough....
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#380 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
So he did. Bravo with the Dream Sequence. At last, he's using his true assets, and now we've got a clever plan.
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#381 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
For all the Daleks are racist homocial sociopaths, they do not hold back on what they see as truth. We've known it for some time, The Doctor has something to do with the Cracks. Has since the first. Now... he's just got to solve the puzzle.
Also, IMHO, you can just move on. Closing the Crack here is anti-climactic. You had him do the impossible of accessing the Morphing Grid and bringing in ALL Rangers (Japanese too, I think), and then called in all the Zoids/MegaZoids on top of that. The mental images alone are priceless.
Also, IMHO, you can just move on. Closing the Crack here is anti-climactic. You had him do the impossible of accessing the Morphing Grid and bringing in ALL Rangers (Japanese too, I think), and then called in all the Zoids/MegaZoids on top of that. The mental images alone are priceless.
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#382 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
Junior. Over and over again. Dammit, you make the mystery more confounding each time!
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#383 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
I didn't say anything earlier, because I had to look up what Universe Steven Universe was from.
Zygons. Interesting, but I didn't get into this one. I had very little emotional reaction to the danger, and not a single 'edge of seat' moment. It was all rather anti-climatic for lack of a better word.
Maybe because it's the first after the Dalek episode. Maybe because I never heard of the Universe, and had no connection to the characters. Either way, it was a 3/10.
Zygons. Interesting, but I didn't get into this one. I had very little emotional reaction to the danger, and not a single 'edge of seat' moment. It was all rather anti-climatic for lack of a better word.
Maybe because it's the first after the Dalek episode. Maybe because I never heard of the Universe, and had no connection to the characters. Either way, it was a 3/10.
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#384 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
The issue with crossovers is that if someone's unfamiliar with the material, they don't get the same feeling. (For instance, Chris O'Farrell has made it clear to me that he skips anything involving Korra, as well as a few other settings).
That said, I think you'd like Steven Universe.
That said, I think you'd like Steven Universe.
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#385 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
Nice touch, giving Pearl a trip.
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Yeah. The SU episode "Space Race" was the one that guaranteed SU would be showing up in Series 4. Then as I thought on it (and watched more episodes) I realized it was a setting that would fit letting the Zygons come out to play, and then the whole idea of the Zygons manufacturing their own gems to tap the shapeshifting and energy powers came into play so I could make them a threat to the Crystal Gems in combat.LadyTevar wrote:Nice touch, giving Pearl a trip.
Plus it let me follow up on hints from the last Mass Effect and LoK episodes, namely that there was something or someone pulling strings through the Cracks...
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#387 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
YAY! More Harry and the Doctor!
Will there be a scene with Mab?
Will there be a scene with Mab?
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#388 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
Dark Council Interferrence, For the Win!
Yeah, JUST what they need.
Yeah, JUST what they need.
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#389 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
It will be amusing if the Doc'tor's little slip opens his Box of Memory just enough to backhand Nemesis out of his mind.
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#390 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
I doubt many, if any, of Nemesis' other victims ever thought of frontal attack like that. Most would have put up barriers, wards, anything to keep it out. A sudden SallyForth would have been thought suicidal.
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To be fair, I suspect Nemesis usually is more subtle with the more powerful beings. I wouldn't be surprised if he infected Maeve more carefully and indirectly than his attempt here. But here he was pressed for time and tried brute force infection.LadyTevar wrote:I doubt many, if any, of Nemesis' other victims ever thought of frontal attack like that. Most would have put up barriers, wards, anything to keep it out. A sudden SallyForth would have been thought suicidal.
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#392 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
GodsDammit, you made me cry again.
Great job. The music was the perfect touch as always. So was the split orange.
Great job. The music was the perfect touch as always. So was the split orange.
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#393 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
So, they are Cybus-cybermen. Not the Mondian ones.
Interesting.
Interesting.
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#394 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
Sonnuva bitch.
Whomever's behind the portals is getting more ... expansive ... with what tech they're sharing. Not a good thing.
Whomever's behind the portals is getting more ... expansive ... with what tech they're sharing. Not a good thing.
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#395 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
Ah, one of those plans where the only one who knows all of it is The Doctor, and even he's not sure if it'll go right
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DAMN YOU CLIFFHANGER!!!
Otherwise, Great Job! Not sure if the HPG physics would work, but Damn the Doctor is getting smarter
Otherwise, Great Job! Not sure if the HPG physics would work, but Damn the Doctor is getting smarter
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Well, we know it can work the other way in time with K-F Drive-related technology (the story of the SLS Manassas).LadyTevar wrote:DAMN YOU CLIFFHANGER!!!
Otherwise, Great Job! Not sure if the HPG physics would work, but Damn the Doctor is getting smarter
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#398 Re: Author Feedback: Steve
I'm caught up. Now post the next one, dammit
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Garrus, Gibbs, Aric Jorgan & Havoc Squad, Yoko Littner, Shepard, T'Goni & Squad, Weka & Krogan Squad, The Mercs, Homura & the Girls, a squad of Wookiees, and GodDamn Captain AMERICA? I'm waiting for DC comics to show up!
As for the TARDIS, is she under attack, or is she trying to stop The Doctor?
As for the TARDIS, is she under attack, or is she trying to stop The Doctor?
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Under attack.... maybe. Heh. Admittedly I had a bit of a plothole there because if he could just whisk Martin and the victim straight to the altar, there'd be no drama.LadyTevar wrote:Garrus, Gibbs, Aric Jorgan & Havoc Squad, Yoko Littner, Shepard, T'Goni & Squad, Weka & Krogan Squad, The Mercs, Homura & the Girls, a squad of Wookiees, and GodDamn Captain AMERICA? I'm waiting for DC comics to show up!
As for the TARDIS, is she under attack, or is she trying to stop The Doctor?
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"The chance of Shep talking his way into the control room for an ICBM is probably higher than that." - Seth
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