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LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Apr 20, 2006 1:44 pm

Wife of SirNitram, LeigeLady of the BlackMages and the only one they truly fear. One of the three Moderators of this forum, and a voracious reader of fantasy and fan-fics. However, I have written in the past, and will write more as the mood strikes me.

Revealations from a Certain Point of View
My first fic in this forum, based loosely on events from the now-defunct AOL chatRPG BlackBayou. Written as pages in a journal from mother to daughter.

Revealations: Cycle's End: Continuing the story, this time from the new generation as they attempt to close the cycle for good.

Narsil · Post by **Narsil** » Sun Apr 23, 2006 3:50 pm

Finally read through Revelations. Interesting stuff, well written. Though not my favourite style of writing (I've never been one for Diary-entry style fiction), I personally enjoyed it and here's looking forward to the sequel

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sun Apr 23, 2006 6:36 pm

The next story is probably going to be written similar to the style in "Song of Fire and Ice"

Post by **Dark Silver** » Fri May 19, 2006 7:28 pm

So far so good on the first chapter of the new Revelations story Tev...

nice set up for the next chapter.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sun May 21, 2006 10:16 pm

Ok... there is a problem. Something in the chapter is screwing with LibArc's format and redirecting me to the HomePage. I posted the three sections of the chapter, but one section based around Leena cannot be posted at all.

Truthfully... it's not as important a section. The story is fine without it. If you want to read the full chapter, as I intended, please go to SDnet FanFiction to read the chapter there.

Oddly enough, SDnet had no trouble with it.. just LibArc. :(

EDIT:

Ok... this is NOT even funny. The whole reason it was redirecting seems to involve three little words.
Fetch

the

car.

That's it. When I changed the sentence to "shall I get the car for you" it went perfectly.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Thu May 25, 2006 5:41 pm

Man someone got a hotheaded son.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu May 25, 2006 6:27 pm

frigidmagi wrote:Man someone got a hotheaded son.

Considering what all the Father got into, he's reaping what he sowed. ;)

Ace Pace · Post by **Ace Pace** » Fri May 26, 2006 1:52 pm

Tevar, I'm just half way in your first story. I'm..I can't stop reading.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Fri May 26, 2006 2:02 pm

Ace Pace wrote:Tevar, I'm just half way in your first story. I'm..I can't stop reading.

Thank you! You have no idea how good that makes me feel

Narsil · Post by **Narsil** » Fri May 26, 2006 2:15 pm

Sorry I haven't had a chance to get around to reading it before - but Revelations pt.2 is turning out to be rather interesting. I didn't read the first story due to my slight distaste for reading diary-entry style fiction, but that is a flaw of mine and not of the story itself.

Ace Pace · Post by **Ace Pace** » Fri May 26, 2006 2:24 pm

LadyTevar wrote:
Thank you! You have no idea how good that makes me feel

Starting the second fic now. Bravo. It was tense.

This is actully the first fiction I've read on SDN and LA in a while.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Jun 22, 2006 2:28 pm

If the chapters suck, but you don't wanna tell me, please let me know so I don't waste time on them anymore.

Narsil · Post by **Narsil** » Thu Jun 22, 2006 2:35 pm

I've only just gotten up to Chapter Six, but it's looking like a damn good story so far, my only suggestion is possibly hyphenating SeanEric so it's more like Sean-Eric...

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Jun 22, 2006 2:40 pm

Narsil wrote:I've only just gotten up to Chapter Six, but it's looking like a damn good story so far, my only suggestion is possibly hyphenating SeanEric so it's more like Sean-Eric...

Why? The birth certificate I stole the name from didn't have it hyphenated either

Besides, I *like* SeanEric. If Nitram and I do spawn a boy-child, that's what I'm naming him. SeanEric Keith

But if that's your only complaint, I must be doing *something*

Narsil · Post by **Narsil** » Thu Jun 22, 2006 2:48 pm

LadyTevar wrote:
Narsil wrote:I've only just gotten up to Chapter Six, but it's looking like a damn good story so far, my only suggestion is possibly hyphenating SeanEric so it's more like Sean-Eric...
Why? The birth certificate I stole the name from didn't have it hyphenated either Besides, I *like* SeanEric. If Nitram and I do spawn a boy-child, that's what I'm naming him. SeanEric Keith

Ah well, I suppose it's my being used to hyphenated names rather than directly adding one name onto the end of another one sans the hyphen

... Ah well, I suppose it's my personal experience with hyphenated names - like my own

But if that's your only complaint, I must be doing *something*

I've just finished it, and you need to do something else: write more!

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Jun 22, 2006 2:56 pm

Narsil wrote:
LadyTevar wrote:But if that's your only complaint, I must be doing *something*
I've just finished it, and you need to do something else: write more!

I'm figuring out the next chapter in my head, hon. The Hotoros will figure prominately.

Narsil · Post by **Narsil** » Thu Jun 22, 2006 3:01 pm

I'm figuring out the next chapter in my head, hon. The Hotoros will figure prominately.

Aye, it's always a fucking pain in the arse to do the next chapter, and often seems like much worse than the last. I'm sure there's a law of quantum physics somewhere which makes that a universal truth..

Oh and this:

"Tahalshia Manor, this is Nitram. If you're wanting to speak to my daughter Elizabeth, press 1. If you're wanting to speak to Blackthorne's daughter Jhelian, press 2... and god help you. If you're wanting to speak to the twins, press 3. If you're female and wanting SeanEric or Shadrick, press 4 and get in line. If you're actually wanting to speak to an adult, press 9."

... made me chuckle.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Jun 22, 2006 7:16 pm

Problem: Harddrive has stopped running. Guess where the next chapter is, along wit my notes?

Devonie · Post by **Devonie** » Fri Jul 07, 2006 9:12 am

*twitch*

Must...write.....more......

Having known many of these characters, I NEED TO KNOW WHAT'S GOING ON!

btw, does Ryu know you killed him off *eg*

Dev

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Fri Jul 07, 2006 10:00 am

Devonie wrote:*twitch*

Must...write.....more......

Having known many of these characters, I NEED TO KNOW WHAT'S GOING ON!

btw, does Ryu know you killed him off *eg*

Dev

It was Ryu-mun's suggestion :-D

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sat Jul 15, 2006 4:36 pm

Damn... these chapters are getting harder to write! I thought this one would never get written!

I wonder if I really can wrap this up believably within 20 chapters... :sad:

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon Aug 14, 2006 6:03 pm

Please dear god.. do NOT let the next chapter be that fuckin' hard to write.

Mared · Post by **Mared** » Sat Aug 26, 2006 1:04 am

I'm hanging on you're every word.....More please....More

Moved by me. -CC

Devonie · Post by **Devonie** » Tue Oct 17, 2006 11:33 pm

Tev, my dear, darling sister... I do realize you lost some more stuff when the new harddrive died, but if you do not post another chapter soon, I am going to show up at your apartment, lock Nit in the bedroom and chain you to your computer .. and I'll place Pepsi and Pocky just outta your reach until you finish the next chapter...

DO YOU UNDERSTAND?!?!?!?!?

*huggles*

BTW, I miss you!

Dev

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed Oct 18, 2006 6:30 pm

I might need that kick in the pains, sister dear. I can't get anything to work out. I've tried writing the start of the next chapter all week.. and I've been unable to do more than two sentences.

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