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LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Mar 22, 2007 9:09 pm

OK... the sorceror building the tower is Fail... has to be. But what will he do when he gets back to the real world?

And that was touching, the spouses together.

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Thu Mar 22, 2007 9:45 pm

LadyTevar wrote:OK... the sorceror building the tower is Fail... has to be. But what will he do when he gets back to the real world?

Well, it might be, if I had a character by that name . . . .

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sat Mar 24, 2007 4:57 pm

OMG A NEW WHIRLWIND!!!!

And Kaeryn is once again trying to poke a hole in Nal's inflated ego *giggle* Pity it's too big for a pinprick to work.

So... I wonder who's talking to the (mostly disguised) dwarf? From the conversation between Nal & Kaeryn, I'm assuming it's Nal and Trizk.

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Sat Mar 24, 2007 6:26 pm

LadyTevar wrote:OMG A NEW WHIRLWIND!!!!

So... I wonder who's talking to the (mostly disguised) dwarf? From the conversation between Nal & Kaeryn, I'm assuming it's Nal and Trizk.

No dwarf, just a human. A big and barrel chested fucker. Think of a bigger and rattier version of Tymon from Rome.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sat Mar 24, 2007 8:21 pm

Since I've not seen Rome, I'll have to wing it.

My apologies... I'd taken the lead-in and added it to the describtion, and got 5.

The Cleric · Post by **The Cleric** » Sat Mar 24, 2007 10:49 pm

CC, you REALLY need someone to proof read your posts for spelling

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Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Sat Mar 24, 2007 11:10 pm

The Cleric wrote:CC, you REALLY need someone to proof read your posts for spelling .

If I wanted an asshole's opinion, I would get frigid's because his are actually worth listening to.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sat Mar 24, 2007 11:29 pm

Cynical Cat wrote:
The Cleric wrote:CC, you REALLY need someone to proof read your posts for spelling .
If I wanted an asshole's opinion, I would get frigid's because his are actually worth listening too.

Ok, so I didn't do a good job spellchecking for him this time. I was too excited about simply having a new chapter, dammit!

The Cleric · Post by **The Cleric** » Sat Mar 24, 2007 11:41 pm

Cynical Cat wrote:
The Cleric wrote:CC, you REALLY need someone to proof read your posts for spelling .
If I wanted an asshole's opinion, I would get frigid's because his are actually worth listening too.

I don't read all the fics, just 3. But it's something that always just jumps out at me, whether I'm reading a post or book or my own writing.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sun Mar 25, 2007 9:29 am

The Cleric wrote:
Cynical Cat wrote:
The Cleric wrote:CC, you REALLY need someone to proof read your posts for spelling .
If I wanted an asshole's opinion, I would get frigid's because his are actually worth listening too.
I don't read all the fics, just 3. But it's something that always just jumps out at me, whether I'm reading a post or book or my own writing.

It's easier for me to point out his typos over at SDnet, where I can actually C&P them for reference without skipping back and forth between forums.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon Mar 26, 2007 7:45 pm

A pilgrimage is often a great start to getting yourself back on the path of righteousness. That the entire group (nearly) went with him shows how much they love him, and the touching scene with the astropath shows he loves them back.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Mar 29, 2007 7:23 am

So much for a peaceful pilgrimage. How long before the guardians of the shrine find the interlopers? It's not like Gix can reach a km away....

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon Apr 02, 2007 4:25 pm

Well well... I'd totally forgotten about Black Company.

I had to go back and read the last couple of chapters to remember what was happening.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Apr 05, 2007 6:02 am

Re: BlackCompany. Why do I feel it's not that easy?

Re; Maladar. How's his wife? ;)

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Fri Apr 06, 2007 5:26 am

I found typos in Maladar... but I'm getting ready for work so I can't go over them fully :(

I do want to know if the green lightning was what the "Eyes of Fire" had been ordered to do.

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Fri Apr 06, 2007 5:33 am

LadyTevar wrote:I found typos in Maladar... but I'm getting ready for work so I can't go over them fully :(

I do want to know if the green lightning was what the "Eyes of Fire" had been ordered to do.

No. The Eyes of Fire isn't there. He's on the other side of the mountains relaying Maladar's orders to his landed planes.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed Apr 11, 2007 12:49 pm

Ok, Cat? I know ReGenesis is Blackheart's history, but why do I suddenly fear a time-travelling weapons-dealer might wind up as someone we're having to deal with now?

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Apr 12, 2007 5:46 am

And Nalifan once again uses that massive INT score. It does make you wonder what traps may be laid within.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Apr 12, 2007 5:48 am

Someone's been playing 40K Space Battles, it seems. Very well done, as usual, but I have the feeling Jolan's itching to get into the fight himself. Must be hard to feel so useless.

The Grim Squeaker · Post by **The Grim Squeaker** » Sat Apr 14, 2007 3:53 am

I just finished reading Regenesis.
Looks like a nice story, (Yay the good guys actually noticing the tumour and trying to deal with it), though the title confused me (Heroes? Most people would think of the tv show, not an original super-hero 'verse

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Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Sat Apr 14, 2007 4:37 am

The Grim Squeaker wrote:I just finished reading Regenesis.
Looks like a nice story, (Yay the good guys actually noticing the tumour and trying to deal with it), though the title confused me (Heroes? Most people would think of the tv show, not an original super-hero 'verse )

I know, but we named the RPG (in the RPG thread) first. This is background on my character.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Apr 19, 2007 5:48 am

You know, I kinda like the idea of the Daleks protecting the Kaleds.

It's nice to see them as a hero for once, oddly enough.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Fri Apr 20, 2007 5:57 am

Vampire: Ah yes... turn your character over without a thought or word, and get brownie points for doing so. And people wondered why I never really liked playing Vampire. At least the Werewolves were more straight-forward: if they wanted to fuck you up, they'd call you out in a challenge and beat the shit outta you fairly.

Unless it was a ShadowLord.........

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Fri Apr 20, 2007 11:01 am

Please, please let the Daleks use the "We Are Superior Beings" line!

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sat Apr 21, 2007 5:03 pm

Oooo... space battle. You do great things with space battles. I can't wait

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