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by Cynical Cat » Tue Sep 11, 2007 11:07 pm
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So, StarJammer was an (accused) criminal? Makes one wonder how she 'protested' the Council's 'lies'.
She dug up the truth and started being noisy about it.
Wonder why Megs protected her in the Ring? Either way, it got him a loyal ally.
Because he was building his army at that point, her information confirmed his suspicions and brought him closer to the truth about Cybertron's past, and she was smart and useful. And he liked her.
Is the next chapter going to be 'Stryke's Rebellion, or will there be another chapter leading up to it?
More chapters.
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by LadyTevar » Wed Sep 12, 2007 5:36 am
Ahh.... thanks for the answers, 'Cat. You know I'm always happy to read more of your writing
Now if you can just work on the AIM-thing
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by LadyTevar » Fri Sep 14, 2007 5:50 am
That was bitter, brutal... and ultimately wasteful.
In G-1 cartoon, there was something noble about the Autobot's fight. Now, your stories and the RPG thread are making me wonder why they're fighting anymore, when the cost has been so high.
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by Cynical Cat » Fri Sep 14, 2007 10:19 am
LadyTevar wrote: That was bitter, brutal... and ultimately wasteful.
In G-1 cartoon, there was something noble about the Autobot's fight. Now, your stories and the RPG thread are making me wonder why they're fighting anymore, when the cost has been so high.
It's a war that has lasted millions of years without one side or another winning and that only slowing down due to resource depletion. I can't imagine it as anything other than bitter and brutal.
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by LadyTevar » Wed Sep 19, 2007 10:17 am
So... now the question is if 'Strike goes to Megatron before he runs for the IceMoon.
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by LadyTevar » Thu Sep 20, 2007 5:52 am
Ok Cyncat... where does Lekkeo's little mission fit in with Zarkess and Daemonstraum?
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by Cynical Cat » Thu Sep 20, 2007 6:43 pm
LadyTevar wrote: Ok Cyncat... where does Lekkeo's little mission fit in with Zarkess and Daemonstraum?
Vamps have a habit of changing their names with the times.
Lekkeo=Loki=Lamech.
Kargas=Zarkess.
Kargas, who is clearly an asshole, joined the Slaver Lords.
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by LadyTevar » Thu Sep 20, 2007 7:07 pm
Ahhhh... I see now.
And the psychopathic bitch he sent to deal with them?
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by Cynical Cat » Thu Sep 20, 2007 7:36 pm
LadyTevar wrote: Ahhhh... I see now.
And the psychopathic bitch he sent to deal with them?
A woman briefly referenced in my previous story. She'll get proper introduction, don't worry.
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by Charon » Mon Sep 24, 2007 6:39 pm
Involving an old story. But remember your Civil War parody involving Thor bitch-slapping Iron Man?
Yeah, it just happened in the comics. And that's pretty much how it went down.
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by Cynical Cat » Mon Sep 24, 2007 7:27 pm
Charon wrote: Involving an old story. But remember your Civil War parody involving Thor bitch-slapping Iron Man?
Yeah, it just happened in the comics. And that's pretty much how it went down.
Yeah, I saw how it went down.
Happy, happy joy-joy.
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by LadyTevar » Tue Sep 25, 2007 7:38 am
Yeouch!
Not just betrayal, but a critique of his performance in bed.
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by LadyTevar » Tue Sep 25, 2007 6:41 pm
Pyrrhic Victory, but the Necros won that round.
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by LadyTevar » Fri Sep 28, 2007 7:32 am
Well well... another forgotten story rising to the surface :)
Not bad
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by LadyTevar » Tue Oct 02, 2007 5:45 am
Sylveteria raised an eyebrow. "So we add to the chaos?"
"Who would notice?"
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by LadyTevar » Thu Oct 11, 2007 5:19 am
"And Lo, the SkyLord did come to live amongst his people, with his consort and his brothers beside him, and the days that followed were grand and terrible." -- Book of Kzess, Chapter 2.
Sorry, couldn't resist.
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by LadyTevar » Wed Oct 24, 2007 5:42 pm
Ok... I think Key's about to meet the Biggest Baddest thing on the board.
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by LadyTevar » Thu Oct 25, 2007 11:20 pm
Ok... I take that back. It's going to be a tossup between the Eversor and the Daemonhosts.
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by LadyTevar » Wed Oct 31, 2007 5:35 am
Memorium: Brokk was very prepared, having those Pariah readied. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Whirlwind: Ok... now I'm trying to guess what Cats have to do with the next plan. Right now I'm drawing a blank, so I guess I'll have to wait. *sigh* I hate it when Nalifan's being mysterious.
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by LadyTevar » Fri Nov 02, 2007 5:34 am
Yes... she's dead. Unless there is a miraculous save by Keys, she's so very fuckin' dead.
But what is this little scrap in the first paragraph?
He would attempt
Attempt what? To/on whom?
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by LadyTevar » Mon Nov 05, 2007 11:01 pm
OK... I did NOT expect the Eversor to die like that. Way to go Meri!
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by LadyTevar » Tue Nov 06, 2007 12:26 am
I do have to wonder how much of the "Decepticon Religion" remained with the organics.
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by LadyTevar » Wed Nov 07, 2007 6:35 am
So, Jolan, is Justice served?
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by LadyTevar » Thu Nov 08, 2007 9:52 am
You know, of course, now I want to know what happened at Ophillian VII
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by LadyTevar » Fri Nov 09, 2007 6:45 am
And DeathStrike's world is all about to come crashing down :sad:
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