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So, StarJammer was an (accused) criminal? Makes one wonder how she 'protested' the Council's 'lies'.
She dug up the truth and started being noisy about it.
Wonder why Megs protected her in the Ring? Either way, it got him a loyal ally.
Because he was building his army at that point, her information confirmed his suspicions and brought him closer to the truth about Cybertron's past, and she was smart and useful. And he liked her.
Is the next chapter going to be 'Stryke's Rebellion, or will there be another chapter leading up to it?
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Ahh.... thanks for the answers, 'Cat. You know I'm always happy to read more of your writing :lol:

Now if you can just work on the AIM-thing :wink:
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That was bitter, brutal... and ultimately wasteful.

In G-1 cartoon, there was something noble about the Autobot's fight. Now, your stories and the RPG thread are making me wonder why they're fighting anymore, when the cost has been so high.
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LadyTevar wrote:That was bitter, brutal... and ultimately wasteful.

In G-1 cartoon, there was something noble about the Autobot's fight. Now, your stories and the RPG thread are making me wonder why they're fighting anymore, when the cost has been so high.
It's a war that has lasted millions of years without one side or another winning and that only slowing down due to resource depletion. I can't imagine it as anything other than bitter and brutal.
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So... now the question is if 'Strike goes to Megatron before he runs for the IceMoon.
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Ok Cyncat... where does Lekkeo's little mission fit in with Zarkess and Daemonstraum?
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LadyTevar wrote:Ok Cyncat... where does Lekkeo's little mission fit in with Zarkess and Daemonstraum?
Vamps have a habit of changing their names with the times.

Lekkeo=Loki=Lamech.

Kargas=Zarkess.

Kargas, who is clearly an asshole, joined the Slaver Lords.
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Ahhhh... I see now.

And the psychopathic bitch he sent to deal with them?
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LadyTevar wrote:Ahhhh... I see now.

And the psychopathic bitch he sent to deal with them?
A woman briefly referenced in my previous story. She'll get proper introduction, don't worry.
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Involving an old story. But remember your Civil War parody involving Thor bitch-slapping Iron Man?

Yeah, it just happened in the comics. And that's pretty much how it went down.
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Charon wrote:Involving an old story. But remember your Civil War parody involving Thor bitch-slapping Iron Man?

Yeah, it just happened in the comics. And that's pretty much how it went down.
Yeah, I saw how it went down. :lol:

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Yeouch!

Not just betrayal, but a critique of his performance in bed.
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Pyrrhic Victory, but the Necros won that round.
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Well well... another forgotten story rising to the surface :)

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Sylveteria raised an eyebrow. "So we add to the chaos?"

"Who would notice?"
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"And Lo, the SkyLord did come to live amongst his people, with his consort and his brothers beside him, and the days that followed were grand and terrible." -- Book of Kzess, Chapter 2.

Sorry, couldn't resist. :lol:
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Ok... I think Key's about to meet the Biggest Baddest thing on the board.
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Ok... I take that back. It's going to be a tossup between the Eversor and the Daemonhosts.
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Memorium: Brokk was very prepared, having those Pariah readied. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Whirlwind: Ok... now I'm trying to guess what Cats have to do with the next plan. Right now I'm drawing a blank, so I guess I'll have to wait. *sigh* I hate it when Nalifan's being mysterious.
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Yes... she's dead. Unless there is a miraculous save by Keys, she's so very fuckin' dead.

But what is this little scrap in the first paragraph?
He would attempt
Attempt what? To/on whom?
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OK... I did NOT expect the Eversor to die like that. Way to go Meri!
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I do have to wonder how much of the "Decepticon Religion" remained with the organics.
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So, Jolan, is Justice served?
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You know, of course, now I want to know what happened at Ophillian VII
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And DeathStrike's world is all about to come crashing down :sad:
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