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Goddamned vampires.

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BAD Rogue! No commentary in story threads!

But that's a really nice start to a story, Rukia. Please, continue! :)


Maybe I missed something, but what part of "teaser" and "comments welcome" did you fail to understand? :razz:
Last edited by Rogue 9 on Mon Jul 17, 2006 2:45 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Ok so this new story is something I started a while ago and found it floating around my room. It needs a title so if ya'll want to suggest something feel free. Also if something sounds funny.. let me know k?
shark42bait: you are evil...
shark42bait: i admire that in a woman....
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Comments go here yes?
shark42bait: you are evil...
shark42bait: i admire that in a woman....
I'm a mystery wrapped in an enigma wrapped in an AWESOME rack!
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"if you want to get out of a speeding ticket short skirts and crying are still the way to go" Kairy on "mythbusters"

LimePink: "Um, Mr. President? I was doing a suduko puzzle, and based on the hidden co-ordinates in the grid, I think Osama Bin Laden is either here : points on map: or here :points to another spot within 5 miles:. Also, Jay-Z killed Tupac Shakur and the lost treasure of Atlantis actually turned to the glacier that sunk the Titanic."
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An interesting little bit, and it certainly shows the skills of evil. Give us a little more.
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yes, more please.

Although the demon is right. They just lay out the temptation.
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