Nice to know we have supportive fans.Ra wrote:If you'd seen what they have planned on the ARSD (Adam's board), Kresh, whoa. They've got everything planned out.
- Ra
PS: Guess we better not disappoint them or screw up, Adam.
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Nice to know we have supportive fans.Ra wrote:If you'd seen what they have planned on the ARSD (Adam's board), Kresh, whoa. They've got everything planned out.
- Ra
I DON'T WANT SPOILERS!!! *closes his eyes tightly while covering his ears*Ra wrote:If you'd seen what they have planned on the ARSD (Adam's board), Kresh, whoa. They've got everything planned out.
No, Ra. Your reply to my 'no-spoiler' post should be like this:Ra wrote:I never said spoilers. Why would I want spoil the fun?
- Ra
No! I would never turn myself to the Dark Side!Ra wrote:Good... Good! I can feeeeeel you curiosity! Do it! You cannot resist. Despoilerize that text, young Kreshna! Then your journey to the Dark Side will be COMPLETE![/palpy]
Did you see the text on the yellow balloon?Ra wrote:No blood for oil! Er... Borg stuff... something...
Probably a minor nitpick, but the Imperials already knew they were the Asgards, as my previous post:Ra wrote: As more Imperial ships tryed to drive in closer to Earth, an Alllegiance-class vessel exploded under the combined fire of five Beliskner-class motherships.
"Who the hell are these people?"
"They're not Goa'uld vessels, that's for sure!"
Reasonably, the Coruscant Intelligence Agency (CIA) should have known about the Asgard. After all, the Goa'ulds and the Empire were allies; the Empire should have the Asgards noted in their database.Me wrote: Aboard the Eclipse, Captain Copeland nods with satisfaction, "the intelligence report is correct; Earth is populated with Asgard motherships. Let's waste no time, people. Fire on the lead mothership."
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Captain Copeland is not sure whether the Asgardian Supreme Commander named 'Thor' is actually on-board the annihilated mothership, but at least they have decapacitated the enemy's command ship.
Don't forget to emphasize that Coruscant is still under siege by the Guardians. See, the 'play' between me and DarkSilver still ensues.Ra wrote:*Coruscant*
Senator Clarke had arrived at the Imperial Senate, completely calm as virtually everyone else was frightened and moving around in terror. Slowly, he makes his way down a corridor....
The problem is, the small battlegroup led by Captain Copeland is only the initial spearhead of Imperial Task Force attacking Earth, as in my previous post:Ra wrote: "And you were saying, Captain?"
"The fleet was decimated. We took the aliens... called the Asgard, by surprise, but it was to no avail. Only three Star Destroyers out of twelve escaped."
See? There were still the 437th fleet and the 15th fleet hanging around to assault the Earth after Captain Copeland's task force performs the initial strike.Me wrote:Now, gentlemen, the Goa'ulds have left Earth lightly defended, but we shouldn't let us to be overconfident. We will need the 437th fleet and 15th fleet to hyperjump at this point, while......" Thorne points his laser pointer to the Holo-screen while the meeting continues.
Alright. Seriously, now, I've got some tips accordingly.Ra wrote:I edited my last two posts. Again I prove to be the grand fucker uper of things.
Yes, yes. We have a couple more huge posts and it should be done. I think Robert is waiting for me to post next, but my writing skills are pitiful and I don't want to ruin it...Kreshna Aryaguna Nurzaman wrote:By the way, while I like to see how the game (and the story evolve), I guess we're still waiting for Lord Walper and Lord Adam to finish the duel until we can accelerate the pace again.
But don't forget the things you've (the in-game Ra) already got in hand: the virus, for example. That may help you kicking the Guardians (DarkSilver should try to stop Ra/Galadriel; the Guardians knows the virus is dangerous. On the other hand, The Organization haven't tested it yet.)Ra wrote:Whoa, Whoa, Whoa. I just got an idea.
THE FINAL SHOWDOWN
We have three plots going on; The Defense of Earth (Asgard, Rebels, and Goa'uld vs. the Empire, along with Galadriel's expedition on the Moon), the Battle of Coruscant (Empire vs. Guardians), and the Duel (Borg/Sauron vs. the A'millians). Obviously, these could tie in.
1: Galadriel has found the Oracle of Datasse, which tells (albeit incompletely) how to "exorcise" the Phoenix. It was kind of like the Guardian's Manhattan Project. After escaping the Soong-Oth, Galadriel and Ra will be beamed up by Asgard transporters, but they were being captured by an Imperial ship. Retrieving her lightsabre, Galadriel goes from captured to captor. The battle soon ends with a narrow victory for the Alliance of Three.
I'm still unconscious in Coruscant, though. Probably Galadriel would need to wake him up? Or maybe Lord Walper, after the duel with Lord Adam, should 'kidnap' the unconscious Darth Kreshna by beaming him to the Death Star? But what is Lord Walper's motivation, then? Benevolently trying to help Darth Kreshna because they're allies? Or trying to absorb the Phoenix into himself out of ambition? But remember the potential repercussion if Darth Kreshna wakes up and notices what happens.Ra wrote:2: Darth Kreshna escapes from the Seige of Coruscant and Guardian pursuit, through unknown means.
I guess the first thing to do is finishing the duel, to keep the timeframe consistent, y'know!Ra wrote:3: The Duel ends however it will end. Darth Kreshna arrives at the Borg-controlled Death Star, to seek shelter. The Guardians give chase.
Prepare for a great battle!!!Ra wrote:4: Galadriel knows what must be done. Sensing that the Phoenix has moved to Borg space, she musters everyone that can be mustered. The Army of Lights, led by none other than the Lady of Light herself. All Goa'uld (Ra, Baal, and minor System Lords), Rebel, and A'millian ships not committed during the Duel form up, with the nine Asgard ships also joining them. As one, they go off to Borg Space.
Yup. Remember, Guardian ships are strong but the Death Star is worth millions of Imperial ships (SDN volume calculation, IIRC). So make it one hell of a battle!Ra wrote:5: The Final Battle begins. The Guardians, all of them, surround the Death Star. The Archmage Sdenna Assar demands Kreshna's surrender. "RELEASE KRESHNA TO US!". Then, the Army of Lights arrive, right into the middle of the fray. The battle begins. Three fleets, three strategies (Galadriel, Sdenna, and the Phoenix). All three sides take titanic losses in the vast battle, while Galadriel, Ra, and Leia try to get aboard the increasingly damaged Death Star.
I guess the Champion who should take down the Phoenix in final showdown is either Lord Walper or Lord Adam; whoever wins in the duel between them. And other characters should probably 'channel' their mystical/magical force to the Champion. You know, like in DC Comics Crisis on Infinite Earths, where DCU magicians were channeling their power into the Spectre while he battles the Anti-Monitor.Ra wrote:6: The final showdown with the Phoenix. Amiwen the Black returns to fight him, distracting the Phoenix while Galadriel puts her powers to the ultimate test. Soon, her and Leia also end up caught in the fighting, but Galadriel does the final part of the exorcism, and it is set loose from Kreshna. After wandering around seeking a host, unable to get into Galadriel (her will is too strong), it goes into Leia. But Leia, a lightsider, is too stong, and is able to supress it.
Yup. Remember, Babylon Five did not end when the Shadow War ended. In the next session the good guys were facing the oppressive Earth Alliance under the dictatorship of President Clark.Ra wrote: The war is over. But a hell of a lot of threads and problems will need to be tied up, which is what the sequels are for.
Yup. Let's not rush in, by the way.Ra wrote:7: Conclusion. This will be revealled in due time, but I have it planned already, at least as far as the Goa'uld and Eldar are concerned.
The Guardians don't know about the Oracle, and won't show up at the Battle of Earth. As for that... Lilith... I don't know. I didn't intend to make him/her/it a very big plot element.Kreshna Aryaguna Nurzaman wrote:But don't forget the things you've (the in-game Ra) already got in hand: the virus, for example. That may help you kicking the Guardians (DarkSilver should try to stop Ra/Galadriel; the Guardians knows the virus is dangerous. On the other hand, The Organization haven't tested it yet.)
And how about Lilith?
What I meant was that Darth Kreshna is waylaid by the Soong-Oths, and obviously awakened. Sdenna wants him awake when he disintegrates him.I'm still unconscious in Coruscant, though. Probably Galadriel would need to wake him up? Or maybe Lord Walper, after the duel with Lord Adam, should 'kidnap' the unconscious Darth Kreshna by beaming him to the Death Star? But what is Lord Walper's motivation, then? Benevolently trying to help Darth Kreshna because they're allies? Or trying to absorb the Phoenix into himself out of ambition? But remember the potential repercussion if Darth Kreshna wakes up and notices what happens.
Obviously.I guess the first thing to do is finishing the duel, to keep the timeframe consistent, y'know!
I wanted the showdown I explained in the first place, although the Duel's victor would play a part, obviously. At least one where Galadriel gets a chance to do the exorcism.Prepare for a great battle!!!
I imagine, however, the winner of the duel (between Lord Walper and Lord Adam) would face the Phoenix in a cosmic duel. Probably in some interplanar dimension, where the duel is performed by their 'soul' while their physical body is in meditative state?
Well, yeah, but the Guardians are going to basically take the brunt of superlaser attacks, and they'll blow the dish up midway in the fighting. Remember, the ENTIRE Guardian fleet is here. Thousands upon thousands upon thousands of ships. Like nearly a million. That's just against the Death Star, and both sides (Guardians and DS TL batteries) will blow away much of each side before the AoL shows up.Yup. Remember, Guardian ships are strong but the Death Star is worth millions of Imperial ships (SDN volume calculation, IIRC). So make it one hell of a battle!
Meh, I'm not too keen on this. I would prefer the fight between the victor and Phoenix, with Amiwen's help. No cosmic chanelling stuff.I guess the Champion who should take down the Phoenix in final showdown is either Lord Walper or Lord Adam; whoever wins in the duel between them. And other characters should probably 'channel' their mystical/magical force to the Champion. You know, like in DC Comics Crisis on Infinite Earths, where DCU magicians were channeling their power into the Spectre while he battles the Anti-Monitor.
Let's just not repeat the suckiness of Legend of the Rangers.Yup. Remember, Babylon Five did not end when the Shadow War ended. In the next session the good guys were facing the oppressive Earth Alliance under the dictatorship of President Clark.
Gotcha, but Saan will still be a thorn in his side for awhile.See, in our STGOD, Senator Clark is aiming for Presidency. Since the Guardian will be gone after the war end, there will be a power vacuum. The Empire will be the sole superpower, under the oppressive (but ruthlessly decisive) regime of President Clark.
Sounds good.Then I (out-universe Kreshna) will stop playing as the Empire, and will concentrate on Darth Kreshna's faction (Captain McKenzie and Darth Kreshna -if the Sith Inquisitor will be still alive after the war). I guess Allen want to play as the powerful & ruthless Galactic Empire?
Hmm, I would prefer to keep the different sides in their own territories, personally.Probably planet Earth would be the 'Babylon Five'; the home of the Goa'ulds, the Borg, the A'millans, the Trollish Imperium, and Darth Kreshna's faction?
Yeah, but we are coming toward the conclusion, that's why I posted.Yup. Let's not rush in, by the way.
Of course.(1) By not rushing in, other players can have more chance to participate as well. I guess Allen is itching to steamroll the universe with his Guardian fleet!
Yeah.(2) Also, the plot can still evolve. I believe what you have laid is general possibilities instead of fixed plot details. I hope there is still room for development, and to enjoy play the game as well. Like Robert said, an STGOD where every details are already fixed on stone won't be much fun.
He will escape, that's just the direction of the plot. As for the virus, Ra will do it soon enough. In fact, he could be trying that as a prelude to the AoL's arrival in Borg space (to lower the amount of enemies they have to fight). Of course, I've already decided that it'll fail spectacularly, and have Archmage Sdenna laughing his ass off.(3) But from my respond to your every points above, I believe there is still plenty of room to let the plot develop based on how we play it. For example, how about the virus? How will Darth Kreshna escape? And what if he fails to escape and being captured by the Guardians?
True, but this plot was kinda set up to get all the factions in one place. Then the gigantic threesome - errr, battle royale, begins.Yes, Allen (because he plays as the Guardians) should be itching to capture the Phoenix. What if he succeed? That's why a general plot should be flexible enough to anticipate unexpected plot development. This is still a game, after all.
Of course, that's true, but planning things out is always better than going in blind. I got a brainstorm walking around in my yard, and I wanted to share my thoughts with everyone.But hey, the unexpected things are actually the fun part! Remember Ra's mission on Coruscant? I did not expect Ra would rescue Commander Flotsam from prison with gun-blazing style; thus exposing their mission and ruining the relationship with the Empire. Remember the meeting with Captain McKenzie? I did not expect Galadriel would walk out from the meeting, and I didn't expect Irene to defect to the Army of Lights either, but it opens new plot possibilities, like the battle royal where Galadriel, Amy Lee, and Destructionator were fighting the Phoenix!
Ra wrote: YOU CAN'T WAKE PATTERSON UP!
She's NOT SUPPOSED TO SHOW UP UNTIL THE CONCULSION!