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Not always. The ones that are meant to go down like a bitch are just "The Balor" :wink:
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.......

If she thinks freeing Trizk is going to get her mercy, she's sadly mistaken.

What spell did Nal use on the Balor?
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What spell did Nal use on the Balor?
It's inspired by the 29th level Warlock power Light of Drelban.
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Once again, TF had Nitram and I grinning widely. Great job!
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Ok, dammit... when are you going to reveal Wither's game?
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LadyTevar wrote:Ok, dammit... when are you going to reveal Wither's game?
When he reveals it; now shush. :razz:
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LadyTevar wrote:Ok, dammit... when are you going to reveal Wither's game?
When he reveals it; now shush. :razz:
When I finish writing this next installment. :lol:
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Wither was Nalifan ... who had lost last time, and his friends had died. Wither set it up so he could win. I'm betting the blocked room was also Wither's doing, to prevent his friends from interfering and getting killed.
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LadyTevar wrote: I'm betting the blocked room was also Wither's doing, to prevent his friends from interfering and getting killed.
That was collateral damage from the battle. The balor explosion and the wall of force weren't good for the castle, nor were the rampaging dragons, fires, beholder disintegrations, etcetera.
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Ah well... at least the rest of the party survived.

Now, whatever will happen to Elvara, hmm?
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..........
And he even let Elvarra live? After betraying him?

Ok, Kaeryn's finding that part hard to believe. :razz:

Nice little wrap-up. Does Nal get to keep his girl now? :lol:
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LadyTevar wrote:..........
And he even let Elvarra live? After betraying him?

Ok, Kaeryn's finding that part hard to believe. :razz:

Nice little wrap-up. Does Nal get to keep his girl now? :lol:
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Cynical Cat wrote:Is that a green eyed green bellied serpent? Why yes it is! I'll just feed it some sour grapes and return it to its briar patch habitat. :cool:
:lol: He has a brilliant mind, a fantastic body, and he serves his women breakfast in bed. Damn straight Kaeryn's jealous :twisted:
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:lol:

Such decadence leads only to weakness. It is only through unswerving service to the Triad that life gains meaning and...

Oops. Sorry; was channeling Quinlan for a second. You haven't met him yet. :razz: Crazy Ilmatian needs to take a chill pill and a Plea of Rest. :cool:

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Rogue 9 wrote: Masterful as always, your Catliness.
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All the pieces are in place, it seems...


Who's on the third vessel? You didn't have them identify. Is it Our Heros, or is it the unknown vessel that DeathStrike was meeting?
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LadyTevar wrote:All the pieces are in place, it seems...


Who's on the third vessel? You didn't have them identify.
That is correct. :twisted:
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LadyTevar wrote:All the pieces are in place, it seems...


Who's on the third vessel? You didn't have them identify.
That is correct. :twisted:
Rotten man. When's the next chapter so we can find out? :lol:
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The next chapter will probably be up today.
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Yeah.. I knew it. Deathstrike and Co.

Amazing how you managed to get the tenseness of the Wrecker's crash with so few sentences and so little description. But where are Our Heros?
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Amazing how you managed to get the tenseness of the Wrecker's crash with so few sentences and so little description. But where are Our Heros?
What do you mean? I just told you where Deathstrike and Megatron are- oh wait. You meant Autobots. :wink:

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LadyTevar wrote:
Amazing how you managed to get the tenseness of the Wrecker's crash with so few sentences and so little description. But where are Our Heros?
What do you mean? I just told you where Deathstrike and Megatron are- oh wait. You meant Autobots. :wink:
When I say Our Heros, I mean Our Bots That We Loaned You. :lol:

If you want to talk Decepticon Heros... Where's StarScream? I mean, Deathstrike's a well-build bot and all, but he's not StarScream. :twisted:
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If you want to talk Decepticon Heros... Where's StarScream? I mean, Deathstrike's a well-build bot and all, but he's not StarScream. :twisted:
There will be plenty of Starscream action shortly. It should satisfy all of his fangirls. :grin:
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LadyTevar wrote:
If you want to talk Decepticon Heros... Where's StarScream? I mean, Deathstrike's a well-build bot and all, but he's not StarScream. :twisted:
There will be plenty of Starscream action shortly. It should satisfy all of his fangirls. :grin:
heh. You really want to satisfy a fangirl, Deathstrike v/s Starscream. :twisted:
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Ahh... I see you're jumping back into the UnderHive. :grin: I like his quirk of 'Bride' and 'Daughter' (s?) for his weapons.
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