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Whoooooooo!!!! Blitzwing is coming! Reunion time! Place your bets now ladies and gentlemen Blitz and Breakout are gonna go at it again!

Cat, make it a good one man.
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frigidmagi wrote: Cat, make it a good one man.
I will not fail you, my magi.
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Megs always did love a challenge....
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There is only one word for this.


SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Arrgggh Cat you're teasing us.
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That's no hunter... merely a Butcher.
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Kinda like hunting sleepy puppies and calling it a chanlledge. Of course this may be just bait to get the real exciting prey. Adventurers.
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A deer doesn't much chance against a hunter either. And yes, this is only beginning.
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A few words on the new TF Chapter:

1. GO BREAKOUT!!! :lol:

2.
It was a pity that even with some deliberate inaccuracy, Megatron would likely take only minor damage from the cluster bombs. Well, he could always get lucky.

Lucky that you survived Sixshot's blast, you mean, Starscream? Don't worry, we wont tell Megs about this. :wink:

3. Ravage retailiates. Good kitty :twisted:

4. This is why Megatron is the leader, Sixshot. At least you're surrendering gracefully. :roll:
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Excellent Chapter Cat....

Megatron showing that even the Solo Transformer Assault Group can't take him out is so much more fitting....

plus I will enjoy seeing how Shockwave and Megatron reprogram him..
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If he approached from upwind, the dogs would smell him a mile away.
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Rogue 9 wrote:If he approached from upwind, the dogs would smell him a mile away.
Then its a case of me getting upwind and downwind confused. The wind brought the dog's scent to him, not the other way around, which the rest of the text makes clear.
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Ah Predaking.....

my second favorite Gestault...
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Dark Silver wrote:Ah Predaking.....

my second favorite Gestault...
Who is your favorite?
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Bruticus.
"BRUTICUS HATE AUTOBOTS! BRUTICUS DESTROY!"

Though Predaking does run a close second.
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You know, I had assumed a werewolf. Bugbear works too.
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Rogue 9 wrote:You know, I had assumed a werewolf. Bugbear works too.
It's not like there's a shortage of predatory semi humanoids in D&D.
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Great fight. Good job and now the questions.

1: Did you shrink Breakout?

2: How did Megatron know of Deathstrike's.... huh... lapse of faith let's call it? I thought he fled after Megatron disappeared?

3: How the hell was Prime planning to hold Megatron on bloody Earth? I can't even imagine holding him on fucking Cybertron, forget Earth!
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"That's why you have to stay behind. Reynard addressed the crowd.
Two typos: No closing quotes, and shouldn't that be Mathias, not Reynard?
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Hunter was good.

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Oohho... TWO Maladar chapters.

Excellent work :grin:
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frigidmagi wrote:Great fight. Good job and now the questions.

1: Did you shrink Breakout?
No, Blitzwing is a big bastard, a bit larger than Breakout.
2: How did Megatron know of Deathstrike's.... huh... lapse of faith let's call it? I thought he fled after Megatron disappeared?
He left before that.
3: How the hell was Prime planning to hold Megatron on bloody Earth? I can't even imagine holding him on fucking Cybertron, forget Earth!
Dismantling him.
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And now Our Heros get to play tag with the Havoc.

Can we send Breachload out onto the hull as a Main Cannon? :lol:
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Hey the Daleks are back.
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The Daleks are Back! YAY!!!!!

And the Varga plants have matured. *shiver*
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