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The Daleks don't do things small, do they.
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Let's be honest, Stryke, it's not her processor you admire most :wink:
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Cat you nailed how I always imagined Breakout/Prime interaction. Good job.
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The Daleks are Victorious!

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Wow. Once again total Dalek dedication to the cause.
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Wow... getting the Sontarans to give another race credit for their skill and bravery takes a lot. Pity it took the destruction of a major portion of the Dalek fleet to do so.

Of course, that's just what the Daleks want them to think, isn't it.
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Other than the typo, its' a nice teaser for the next chapter of mayhem. :lol:
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YAY!! TF Chapter!

And it's full of fun quips and Dinobots!
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Once again, you're building the tension in Daleks. This is going to be another explosive fight, isn't it.
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Not CIA... MiB, and those glasses did something to weaken his mind. Nice..
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Different time, different service, different war so I'm not dissing.

I still never heard Christians in Actions to refer to the CIA.
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frigidmagi wrote:Different time, different service, different war so I'm not dissing.

I still never heard Christians in Actions to refer to the CIA.
I have no idea of how common that term for the CIA is (I didn't come up with it), but I use it because I like it.

PS: It was invented in the 60s and is apparently still in common enough usage to be found in web pages about slang and terminology used by US forces in Iraq.
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The 'Cons felt epic, Caesar in front of his Legions.

The Autobots felt like a family reunion.


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PS: It was invented in the 60s and is apparently still in common enough usage to be found in web pages about slang and terminology used by US forces in Iraq.
Must be an Army slang. My Marines and I were perfectly content to call em all Spooks or MiB.
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frigidmagi wrote:
PS: It was invented in the 60s and is apparently still in common enough usage to be found in web pages about slang and terminology used by US forces in Iraq.
Must be an Army slang. My Marines and I were perfectly content to call em all Spooks or MiB.
Could be, hell it doesn't even have to be an entire service just a branch of them like Rangers or Green Barets.
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Either way, we all know "Christians in Action" is meant to be derogatory, so that's all we need to know :lol:

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Wow. :shock:


That is one of the best renditions of what happened between Omega and the Constructicons I've ever read. Great job Cat! :lol:
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Hope to see Breakout's musical talent soon.
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frigidmagi wrote:Hope to see Breakout's musical talent soon.
Oh gods, I forgot about that part.

Loved the snipping between Breakout and Stryke. Still, up to now Stryke has been rather one-dimensional. I know in game he took a while to come into his own, but he was more than just Crimson's compatible spark :wink:
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Ok... what happened to Uncle Dom? And whos' the woman with the Moon symbol?
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LadyTevar wrote:Ok... what happened to Uncle Dom? And whos' the woman with the Moon symbol?
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Hecate, and now Hades.

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Oh geesh... a newborn Titan? You don't do things by halves, do you.
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Vae Victus. Appropriate. So appropriate, in fact, that I'm amazed it isn't already taken. :razz:
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