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As much as I hate to say it ... Kaeryn would be that suicidal, without the payment.

I love how you described the city.
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A Faerunian week is ten days long. :wink: Wither might be from a plane where it's seven days for all we know, but natives to the Realms would understand him to mean a tenday.
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Rogue 9 wrote:A Faerunian week is ten days long. :wink: Wither might be from a plane where it's seven days for all we know, but natives to the Realms would understand him to mean a tenday.
I had forgotten about that. I am, however, saved by the fact that its use is merely widespread, not universal, and the drow city states tend to keep time in their own manner.
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Rogue 9 wrote:A Faerunian week is ten days long. :wink: Wither might be from a plane where it's seven days for all we know, but natives to the Realms would understand him to mean a tenday.
I had forgotten about that. I am, however, saved by the fact that its use is merely widespread, not universal, and the drow city states tend to keep time in their own manner.
Then wouldn't a week be 8 days, one for each leg of their wonderful goddess? :wink:
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LadyTevar wrote: Then wouldn't a week be 8 days, one for each leg of their wonderful goddess? :wink:
And then you take one day back out of respect for holy cannibalistic frenzy.
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Dragons?!

... no... he didn't.....
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Rolling Eyesid you just add Unicron's coming into the mix? :shock:
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:shock:

The Undead are his, I'm sure. Fadina's an impressive summoner as well.

Pity he dind't ask Kaeryn as well. :razz:
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Pity he dind't ask Kaeryn as well. :razz:
His plan involves a lot of slave collateral damage.
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LadyTevar wrote:.

Pity he dind't ask Kaeryn as well. :razz:
His plan involves a lot of slave collateral damage.
Is it bad that part of me read that and thought "So what?"
The really sad part? I can't tell if that was Kaeryn 'speaking' or not.
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LadyTevar wrote: Is it bad that part of me read that and thought "So what?"
Well, all of Nalifan is saying so what, but that's the gold standard of bastardism.
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"Megatron," said Starscream, "can you trust Straxus? He may have . . . ambitions."
That's the pot calling the kettle there... :roll:
I see Megs called him on it too ;)

But who is Deathstrike signalling?
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Somehow I doubt that was Deathstrike.
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Dark Silver wrote:Somehow I doubt that was Deathstrike.
That was Deathstrike.
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Dark Silver wrote:Somehow I doubt that was Deathstrike.
That was Deathstrike.
See? I know my Cons. :lol:

Now.. who is he helping?
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You make even History-dumps interesting :lol:
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I see you're on a roll with TF, hon. If you've got more, Post it!
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Crim: Remind me to give Stryke an oil bath and a massage for that save.

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Unicron is coming! Unicron is coming! We're all gonna die!
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Short chapter, but I wonder if Elvarra knows she's been sent to her death.
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The best part about your writing, Cyncat, is how you get not just the Canon Characters dead on, but our own characters as well :lol:
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Once again, I have to compliment your skill at catching all the little nuances of canon and game characters. I loved the interplay! :lol:
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He had yet to expend a single spell.
Oh yeah... this is seriously fucked up for the Desanna.

Part of me doesn't want the demons to get Elvarra. I'd really like to see what Nalifan has planned for her.
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When a Named Balor thinks you're too dangerous to play around with, you're playing with the Big Boys.
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LadyTevar wrote:When a Named Balor thinks you're too dangerous to play around with, you're playing with the Big Boys.
They're all Named.
It's not that I'm unforgiving, it's that most of the people who wrong me are unrepentant assholes.
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